Talk:A Certain Magical Index/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 16:02, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

I'll review this article.Tintor2 (talk) 16:02, 14 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The article looks pretty good but there is some stuff that I think needs to be revised.


 * Lead
 * Can the ability of Toma be explored? Why is it so weird in the setting?
 * Done
 * Based on the infobox, the light novels already ended so the final date could be added. If a sequel is still being published then it's also worth writing there.
 * Added
 * Infobox
 * Since there are way too many forms of sequels and adaptations I suggest using the "collapsed infobox section begin" like in Code Geass or Darker than Blood to avoid conflict between the infobox and prose.
 * Collapsed
 * Plot is easy understand
 * Development
 * I don't think the release subsection is needed based on the length.
 * I removed the subheading, although I do feel the information in it is worth stating in the article.
 * Video games
 * Arcade is too small. Think of the formal writing of an article like a formal letter when each paragraph is well balanced.
 * Combined with another section.
 * Critical reception
 * Same as other sections. There is no need to make so many subsection with that content.
 * Same as above

Other than that, the article is easy to understand. Revise this and I'll gladly pass it.Tintor2 (talk) 18:23, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * See above. Link20XX (talk) 21:11, 14 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Nice work. The article now feels easier to read especially with the infobox focusing on the first work.Tintor2 (talk) 22:23, 14 July 2021 (UTC)