Talk:A Collection: Greatest Hits...and More/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 02:45, 23 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Grabbing for a review if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 02:45, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Lead and infobox
 * For this sentence ("We're Not Makin' Love Anymore" was released as the album's lead single on September 14, 1989 while "Someone That I Used to Love" was distributed as the second and final one in 1989), I would use “and” instead of “while” and add a comma after the first instance of “1989” to separate the two parts of the sentence.
 * I am not certain about this sentence (However, it was commercially successful as it topped that charts in both Norway and Sweden.), specifically the “it was commercially successful” as it is a little subjective. I think that it is better to have the parts on the charts and certification stand by itself.


 * Development and songs
 * Please use Streisand’s full name on the first use and link her.
 * The structure of the second and third paragraphs is somewhat strange. Would it be better to make the release of “We’re Not Makin’ Love Anymore” as a single into its own paragraph as you have done with "Someone That I Used to Love” as the second single. It was just a little weird to read the second paragraph as it goes from a general overview of the album to a part on the first single.


 * Critical reception
 * I do not see any major issues with this, but do think that a topic sentence would be helpful here?


 * Commercial performance
 * This section looks good to me.


 * Final comments
 * Great work with this. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 03:06, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Just letting you know that I will get to this this weekend. Thank you as always. Carbrera (talk) 04:30, 27 March 2018 (UTC).
 * Thank you for the update! Aoba47 (talk) 04:31, 27 March 2018 (UTC)
 * – I believe I addressed the issues – thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 23:00, 31 March 2018 (UTC).


 * Verdict
 * Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 01:15, 1 April 2018 (UTC)