Talk:A Good Man Goes to War/GA1

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:48, 29 May 2012 (UTC)

Those are the only issues I could find. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:37, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: "and serving as a mid-series finale" -> either "and served as a mid-series finale" or "serving as a mid-series finale"
 * Done. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Prequel: "he hears a lot of rumours" Maybe its just me, but I don't like "a lot", maybe "many"
 * I agree. Done. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot: "who has been watching over Amy during her pregnancy and taken her child" I would add 'has' before 'taken'
 * Good catch. Fixed. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Was the false ending ever reported or elaborated on?
 * Not in anything I can find. The only slight elaboration besides "there was a false ending" was in Confidential where Kingston said that what River said in it was not true. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Filming and Effects: "These various sets..." -> "The various sets..."
 * Fixed. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "positive to mixed reviews" I would do it the other way "mixed to positive reviews". Just a personal preference, no biggie
 * Done. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Space needed between the "p." and the page number in Ref. 2 and 10
 * I need to remember that. Done. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Link The Telegraph and The Guardian
 * Done. Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I believe I have fixed everything. Thanks for reviewing! (I'll nominate "The Walk" and "Oubliette" soon, though I don't think your contributions were minor enough so that you could review it) Glimmer721  talk  00:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Awesome everything looks good. I pass. As for The X-Files episodes, yeah, I think I might've been too involved. Maybe ask Grapple? He's a good reviewer.--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:35, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm fine with just waiting until a reviewer comes along. Grapple is a little busy with "Squeeze". Glimmer721  talk  20:11, 30 May 2012 (UTC)