Talk:A House and Its Head

This is a very badly written article right now. The use of the second-person is awkward and unconventional, and the tone is condescending and appears to be essentially written from a shameless position of personal opinion and reaction to the novel. The English is clumsy, and I wonder if it was written by somebody with limited skills in this language. The entire stub leaves one wondering if it was written by a secondary school student who has been set the novel to read as a class text.

Could somebody with real expertise in English literature, and with knowledge of this writer (and this work in particular)please re-write this article with something useful and objectively informative. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 110.238.2.116 (talk) 04:58, 23 April 2013 (UTC)