Talk:A Little Bit/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:08, 17 January 2011 (UTC)


 * No dab links or dead ELs

Background and composition

 * "A Little Bit" lasts for three minutes and forty-seven seconds. – is this really needed? If it is, reword to remove "lasts for" - colloquialish


 * The sheet music analysis needs attribution ie 'According to blah..

Reception

 * "But, Chuck Campbell..." 'but' → however


 * Are there any more reviews? Look through all the reviews from the album on Metacritic
 * Album is not present in Metacritic. I searched everywhere.


 * "The song debuted at number sixty-two in Australia" - on what?
 * On ARIA Charts.

Music video

 * A lot of this section is "The music video..." "the video..." Vary it a bit. Merge the two paragraphs.


 * The synopsis needs a decent copy-edit in terms of prose quality
 * I'll ask someone to copy-edit.


 * "The video reached number seven on Total Request Live countdown." the Total Request Live countdown?

Live performances and cover version

 * "She wore a white top and plaid pants for the performance. She also put on a red hat, and a red tie" - merge


 * You mention the poles twice
 * Removed the duplicate.


 * The cover should have its own level two section at the bottom of the article (just before refs), and needs expansion - particularly with reception
 * I have very few information on the cover. Will try to find out more.

Credits and personnel

 * More wikifying, please

Summary
A good start, but a way to go. On hold, awaiting improvements. Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:20, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Further comments

 * Link music video


 * Source the concert synopsis


 * The cover needs expansion, its own infobox, etc. as it was a single. See When You Believe and Love Don't Live Here Anymore for examples. It should be at the very end, after Simpson's track listing/charts.


 * Trim File:ALittleBitSample.ogg to 22.7 seconds


 * Because there is not much in the way of chartings, expand the current info to include the number of weeks etc.

Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:55, 17 January 2011 (UTC)


 * I would suggest removing the two chart position tables as they give no new information and are a bit confusing. The cover needs more info, particularly critical reception, and also needs some basic info like release date/other info and director of video. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:29, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Removed the tables. Novice7  |  Talk  03:49, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Added a review. But, couldn't find the director. Novice7  |  Talk  11:27, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
 * The release date/label needs a reference, then I think we'll be done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:08, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Added (allmusic). Novice7  |  Talk  03:33, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:49, 20 January 2011 (UTC)