Talk:A Little More Personal (Raw)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 01:33, 21 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * Information is needed in the article to support that the genre of the album is pop rock

Lead

 * ...including at MTV's Total Request Live, The Ellen DeGeneres Show and the American Music Awards of 2005. → Change "American Music Awards of 2005" to "2005 American Music Awards" to make prose flow better

Background and recording

 * ...for which he was charged with driving under the influence of alcohool.[4] → Fix spelling issue

Reception

 * "A Little More Personal (Raw)" debuted at number twenty on Billboard 200... → Add "the" between "on" and "Billboard"
 * ...same position on Billboard Digital Albums, dropping the chart on the following.[13] → Add "week" at the end of the sentence to clarify prose
 * As of May 2008, the album has sold additional 305,000 copies in the United States, and failed to chart in other countries.[16] Add "an" between "sold" and "additional"; Add "has" between "and" and "failed"

Promotion

 * The tour, however, didn't happen for unknown reasons. → Verifiable?
 * ...and her cover of "Edge of Seventeen" in the American Music Awards of 2005.[19] → Change "American Music Awards of 2005" to "2005 American Music Awards"

Track listing

 * Find a source to verify all of the information in this section

Credits and personnel

 * No issues

Charts and certifications

 * No issues