Talk:A Long, Dark Shadow

Ad hominem
I don't know why you keep ad hominem and don‘t focus on the content. If someone just want to focus on that topic with RS and improve the article, is there any rule can stop them? --So47009 (talk) 03:23, 26 June 2023 (UTC)


 * I am trying to assume good faith, but you have no interest in editing articles that aren't about having sex with kids. I'm sorry, I can't trust you after checking your edit history. I will self report to Ani. Very Average Editor (talk) 03:37, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Well, both of the AFC (Dohna Dohna and Yorite Konoha wa Kurenai ni ) created before were by another editor. I just focus more on eroge in the Chinese Wikipedia, and find out the ENWP community do not know much about those source, get suck in the AFC process. So I help to write them.
 * Kana: Little Sister is someone on Chinese Wikipedia find out there are some bishōjo game that many lang ver of Wikipedia have it, but not the Chinese Wikipedia. So I wrote for it on Chinese, and translate it to the ENWP since the original one's quality. So47009 (talk) 04:02, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

Pronouns are inconsistent
It uses "him, his" etc. and then switches to "they". Equinox ◑ 01:51, 28 February 2024 (UTC)


 * I couldn't find any instances of "him" or "he", there was one instance of "his" which I've fixed to "their" as the author uses they/them pronouns according to their website. Sideswipe9th (talk) 02:01, 28 February 2024 (UTC)