Talk:A Modest Proposal/Archive 1

Plagiarism
A cursory glance at http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/modestproposal/summary.html seems to show some of this Wiki page to be plagiarized.


 * I agree that this is clear plagiarism, and I also note that SparkNotes has a clear policy (from SparkNotes Help)


 * Can I use the content on a SparkNotes page on my site?
 * You cannot copy content directly onto a page, but you are welcome to link to the appropriate SparkNotes page.


 * I wrote it so I can assure you that the article is not plagiarism but my very thoughts of "A Modest Proposal". If anything, SparkNotes plagiarized my writing?.


 * I'm reverting the article. Unfortunately, the last original article seems to be from May 8, 2005. --RemoWilliams 05:41, 15 October 2006 (UTC)

Bias
Is this article against Wikipedia's nonbias policy? I will wait for an answer, but if I don't get one, I'll edit out the "Christian ethics" portion. - masmith


 * What's wrong with it? --68.38.174.6 21:20, 5 Mar 2005 (UTC)

public VS publick
Someone changed the full title to omit the final k - not sure about the English of that period, but maybe it was written "publick" back then? (clem 20:31, 16 May 2005 (UTC))

I changed it back to Publick, which is the original spelling, then someone reverted it, and someone else reverted it again.

With all due respect to everyone involved, spelling in 1729 wasn't the same as it is today, and was actually quite a bit less formal. So the question, really, is whether the title of the wiki should correspond to the original title on the pamphlet itself, or modern spelling. I've been unable to find a wiki policy that directly relates to this matter. Perhaps someone can enlighten everyone?

--RemoWilliams 21:05, 23 October 2006 (UTC)


 * In my opinion, the title of the essay should retain the original spelling. A supporting argument is that texts which include a paraphrased version of "A Modest Proposal" cite the original text as a source. Wikisource shows the title as "publick." Dan Slotman 22:09, 25 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Four and a half years later, this would still seem to be an issue. The article cites www.gutenberg.org for the title, which renders the word "publick".  Pretty sure we need to keep that and not the modern spelling. --CAVincent (talk) 05:47, 2 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Quotations and full titles are not "corrected" - there is a clear (sic) note there. Surely it is self evident that once a quotation or other "literal" like a title in period language or spelling is "corrected" it is no longer accurate. Suspect someone feels this is funny. It isn't. Some of us work for many hours correcting shit like this, when we might instead be working on improving articles instead of trying to preserve them.--Soundofmusicals (talk) 19:58, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

Proposal to remove
I believe this article is now (19 December 05) at a stage where the notice can be removed. What do others think?
 * &mdash;gorgan_almighty 10:47, 19 December 2005 (UTC)
 * I have no problem with the article and was surprised to see a cleanup tag on it (I've written a couple of other Swift-related articles) so yes, it's fine. And, to answer the top point, the original title does have a final "k" -- I have a reproduction of the title page in my Swift collection.  The explanation of "modest proposal" is good - usually a "modest proposal" is both grandiose and deliberately arguing the opposite viewpoint for satiric effect.  The Iron Mountain one is a great example.  One of Phillip K Dick's short stories is also based on A Modest Proposal but for the life of me I can't remember which one.  Back to my point, yes, take the cleanup tag off of it.AxS 22:17, 20 December 2005 (UTC)


 * In my opinion, the cleanup tag is no longer warranted. Flcelloguy (A note? ) 01:55, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Laura can Holde'em — Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.9.149.161 (talk) 14:45, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

Satiric and Ironic Nature Requires Explanation
It is pointless to claim it is satirical or ironic and not explain how or in what way or by what evidence you are making the claim. By not giving such evidence, you merely support the position of those who think he was speaking from 1st person and very serious. By not giving such evidence, one could claim he later claimed it was satire and not 1st person only to save his butt. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.214.99.108  (talk • contribs).
 * Perhaps this is a radical idea, but, as the essay is linked in the article, and the essay is rather short, why not just read it? It is common knowledge that the essay is satire.  You can read it and form your own opinion. Coleca 19:09, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

I'm a different person that the one who commented above, but:

The page claims that the problem of people misunderstanding the essay was oweing to the difference between satirical intent and serious tone.

Satire is, by deffinition, ironic. It's intent and tone are necessarily opposed. The wording of the page so far makes it seem as though, in this instance, the problem was that people mistook the serious tone for serious proposal, whereas this is a continual problem with ironic works, especially satire (see Chris Morris, Brasseye Paedophelia Special, Polonius' advice in Hamlet).

The problem was that the natural state of satire, that of ironically adopting the flaws one hopes to explode, and then seriously exploiting those flaws to a humourous effect, tends to cause people to mistake the topic for the subject.

The subject of A modest proposal is indifference to suffering of the Irish poor, but the TOPIC is cannibalism. (there's a good bit on that by Menken and later discussion of Menken's ideas by Will Self, i have no time to resaerch any links however.. sorry :

I'm in no position to provide sources right now, as i'm at work, but it just seems weird to read, on a work of satire, that in this instance the tone and content were at odds. That's what satire is. It's like saying "the reason that these atlantic swimmers got wet is because in the atlantic, the ocean is made of water, and the atlantic water is of the wet variety."

Please someone make a ruling on this. It's just a little thing, but it's the kind of thing that always drives me crazy.. it's not majorly significant as a factual reconstruction of the piece and it's critical reaction in the UK, but it's just sort of sloppy thinking. Maybe decreases credibility to the article and the site in general.


 * I think you are right. Feel free to edit it to make it more clear.  P.S. You can sign your name by typing ~ after your comment.  Dan Slotman 05:06, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

To say that this article is not clearly satirical is a bit ridiculous. Given the context of other works by Swift and his standing as the most renown of English Satirist, shouldn't some things be deemed evident for literary consumption and study? Are we to disect and reference every point and line in every body of work in order to accomodate those who may be completely ignorant of the subject? Granted this is where people come to gain information, however, by presenting this information in an overly-analytic, even Kabbalistic way, the information would no longer be pallatable to the general population. I see no problem with stating that Swift was a Satirist without attempting to prove that he was working with satire throughout this work. Otherwise we must also prove that Shakespeare had a sense of humor or that Milton had a strong sense of religious conviction --where would it end? 72.178.116.85 03:36, 15 February 2007 (UTC)72.178.116.85 03:34, 15 February 2007 (UTC)

Retrieved from "http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:A_Modest_Proposal"

The whole point is that you really believe what the proposer is saying, you're just as monstrous and absurd as he is. Note the disjunct between the proposer's intentions and Swift's real intentions: to ridicule (among other things) how humane concerns of charity and justice are sacrificed in favour of mathematical, economically expedient solutions to the problem of severe inequalities of wealth in society. It's a brilliant piece of savage satire. ~ Gahks


 * At the time of A Modest Proposal there was a widespread feeling amongst the Ruling Classes that the poor were almost a different species from other people, and that the way poor people behaved was due to inherent physical and mental differences from the wealthy and well-off, brought about by the effects of 'bad breeding' - this was before Charles Darwin and his theory of Evolution BTW. So to many in the Ruling Classes it was felt proper to treat the poor in ways that would not be acceptable to they themselves.


 * As a result of this, it was felt by many of the upper classes that the poor were naturally worthless and had only themselves to blame for their poverty. This meant that, in effect, the poor were to blame for their own shortcomings, and (conveniently for the people in power) didn't deserve help - the 'undeserving poor'.


 * The fact that most of the seemingly undesirable aspects of the poor's behaviour (such as crime, prostitution, etc.,) was a direct result of their lack of money and education, was not realised nor cared about by many in power - a bit like kicking someone in the balls and then criticising them for not being able to stand up straight. At the time, the Irish were amongst the poorest people in Britain, and so attracted the most approbation from the well-off and from the politicians of the time.


 * In effect, the poor were despised, and regarded as akin to mere animals. Swift's Modest Proposal was merely illustrating how this viewpoint could be taken to its (patently absurd to most civilised and educated people) logical conclusion.


 * Unfortunately, the un-civilised 'Them' and 'Us' viewpoint being attacked by Swift survived longer in some countries, which lead to places such as Auschwitz and similar, although the targets of blame then were not just the poor. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.4.57.101 (talk) 13:48, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

Sealab reference should be removed
The reference to Sealab 2021 doesn't add anything to the article. I think it should be removed. 66.171.218.105 17:37, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

Speaking of which, the last sentence in this article sums up everything wrong with wikipedia.--74.37.46.145 22:50, 27 September 2007 (UTC)

I completely agree that the Sealab reference should be removed. The show is often funny and smart, but why is its reference to A Modest Proposal any more notable than another. Plus, its a cartoon on basic cable. J P M7791 (talk) 17:12, 15 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Screw you it should. Sealab was the only way I found out about this book.

-G —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.67.115.242 (talk) 02:41, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Structuring: Known-New Contract
In essay composition, the "known-new contract" says that you should generally move the reader from what they're already considered to know into what they're considered not to know. Paragraph three violates the known-new contract by making reference to "the children," which the reader will not understand until the description of "Swift's solution" in paragraph four. Perhaps these can be rearranged or reworded to better support the known-new contract. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.235.15.243 (talk • contribs) 05:44, June 4, 2007

Irony statement
The suggestion that AMP is widely considered to be one of the great examples of irony (and/or satire) in the English language is not controversial. It is taught in grade schools largely for that very reason. I've looked around, and there are many, many sources saying that Swift was one of the greatest satirists/ironic writers in the English language, and that AMP was his one of his greatest works. Ultimately, how can this (widely accepted) assertion be "proven"? Must we find a source that says exactly this? --RemoWilliams 06:57, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
 * It's still an opinion, and until a section appears with a countervailing opinion, we ought to keep it out. It is all the more damaging to write it here because it is such a popular opinion.  --VKokielov 20:25, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
 * But if you kept all opinions out of every article about literature, they'd be a paragraph each. Literary criticism is all opinion.--RemoWilliams 17:44, 3 November 2007 (UTC)


 * Once again, keep it out while it stands alone; it's unfair to the other side. And even then the fairest and justest thing to do with literature is to say, "Read it, and make up your own mind."  We are in the business of enlightening, not confounding.  --VKokielov 18:05, 3 November 2007 (UTC)
 * How is it "unfair to the other side"? What "other side"? The side that thinks A Modest Proposal is not one of the foremost examples of satire in Western literature?  When you mention the word satire to anyone with a college or even high school education, this is probably the only example they can think of.  Just because someone can take a contrary position, doesn't mean that they can't be considered wrong. A statement that this is one of the great examples of irony or satire is about as debatable as stating that the Bible is one of the foremost example of religious literature or that Shakespeare is widely considered one of the greatest playwrights.J P M7791 (talk) 17:16, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Deleted uncited stuff from UnCyclopedia
There doesn't seem to be any evidence that AMP was misunderstood, or that his peers didn't understand it was satirical, or that he nearly lost his patronage, any place that I can find, other than UnCyclopedia: http://uncyclopedia.org/wiki/A_Modest_Proposal.

Please add a citation before editing that content back in. RemoWilliams 17:06, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

"epitome of satire"
It is not universally accepted that obvious irony serves in that capacity. --VKokielov 20:16, 30 October 2007 (UTC)

1/4th
Hey I'm reading this for English and I was wondering whether anyone could clarify some of the background on a mistake I found in A Modest Proposal.

Milton suggests retaining a breeding population consisting of 1/4th males and states "...one male will be sufficient to serve four females." However, with a population of 1/4th males there will be three females for each male. I'm not sure whether he means that one male would be sufficient to serve four female, whther he made a mistake in the mathematics, or whether he made the mistake in a highly obscured tongue-in-cheek manner. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.141.186.166 (talk) 19:58, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Yes, so obscured as to be irrelevant... I'm no expert, but I suspect what he is talking about is a ratio of four to one, so his calculations are correct. In any case, I think you are reading way more into that than was ever intended. It really has no bearing on the argument of the piece. You'll have to try another angle if you want something original to justify an A ;-) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.239.39.87 (talk) 13:54, 30 May 2008 (UTC)

Links
None of the links work. Can they be removed? They go to error pages. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mdprier (talk • contribs) 21:49, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Unclear footnotes
Several footnotes cite "Lewis" and a page number. Which work by which Lewis is intended? ~ MD Otley (talk) 03:50, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Yeah could someone help us out on this one please? ~ Gahks —Preceding undated comment added 01:36, 29 April 2011 (UTC).

Fixed the issue. All of the quotations actually refer to previous cited article by Charles Smith. Not sure where "Lewis" came from.Trixi72 (talk) 14:47, 30 April 2012 (UTC)

Reception?
The article is notably missing any information on how the "Modest Proposal" was received at the time it was published. Please add. -- 92.230.24.6 (talk) 09:15, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
 * long connection, but I remember hearing about how it was originally taken at face value and the satire was missed. People thought that Swift was a monster. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.102.16.21 (talk) 14:23, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Agreed that a section on reception at the time would improve the article. What I was taught in school (many years ago) was that while pamphlets addressing political questions of the day had become common by this period, the use of satire and irony was virtually unknown, and as a result the "proposal" was near-universally taken at face value. (What I am trying to say is that this wasn't a matter of stupidity; readers at the time simply had no tools to detect satire or reason to suspect it.) I believe the proposal was actually denounced in British Parliament, which I guess was better than a move to enact it. --CAVincent (talk) 06:47, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Team Fortress 2 reference?
Do you guys think that TF2's "poor and Irish" used to describe people without much hats can be a reference to A Modest Proposal? Just wonderin (their website is tf2.com btw) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.95.155.8 (talk) 11:32, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

Sections and headers
if you all do not mind, I re-organized a couple of the sections. Bearian (talk) 15:10, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

Kill the poor - Menzies House
A very recent article along similar lines - there are many claiming that is it NOT Satire .... as usual http://www.menzieshouse.com.au/2013/04/kill-the-poor.html#more — Preceding unsigned comment added by 60.242.247.177 (talk) 00:59, 16 April 2013 (UTC)

Inaccuracies?
The article refers to the opinions of two commentators, Donald C Baker and Louis A Landa. I’ve no idea who they are or what knowledge they have of Irish society in the 1720s but either their views are misreported or they were misled. The phrases in question are “English mistreatment of the Irish poor” and “England was denying Irish citizens their natural rights”.

While Swift rightly aims some of his satire at the government of Great Britain (not England, which had ceased to have overall responsibility for Ireland since union with Scotland in 1707), many of the evils he analyses were the responsibility of the government and people of Ireland. To blame all Ireland’s woes on the British, without whom the island would have been an earthly paradise, is lazy and inaccurate.

--Hors-la-loi (talk) 10:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Actually Swifts target was modern economics, not the government of Ireland at all - see http://www.newworldencyclopedia.org/entry/A_Modest_Proposal.203.80.61.102 (talk) 03:04, 2 November 2017 (UTC)


 * "Actually Swift[']s target[s]" were several things - not unconnected nor mutually exclusive. --Soundofmusicals (talk) 04:41, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

The link to the author of the letter from Lord Bathhurst is to the 3rd Earl, whereas the date would indicate it should be to the 1st. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:32F7:DD10:9D7E:161F:447E:2191 (talk) 14:52, 25 March 2018 (UTC)

Contemporary Reaction
The article lacks an analysis of contempory reaction to Swift's Modest Proposal. It's not my area of expertise, but I would love to read what others have to say. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 159.53.110.141 (talk) 20:57, 23 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Agree with that. It would also be useful to have some kind of context about political pamphleteering of the time, and the role in the context of Swift's career.  One other minor detail I was looking for was the sale price: Prof Judith Horley on the linked BBC Radio programme suggests it may have been 6d.  It's octavo, so that seems a lot for 16pp.  Also is it of interest that Swift's, although by far the most famous is not the first "modest proposal".  --Cedderstk 21:30, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

"Published anonymously"
It very often happens that works such as this are published anonymously - although we later find out who they were in fact written by. This happens often enough not to be at all "confusing". Really. If the editor who wanted to delete the "anonymously" from this statement is serious (surely not - we may not all be intellectuals here but we do assume basic literacy) then perhaps a fuller explanation might be included, but this is unnecessary (honest) - and would be hard to do neatly without giving the impression we thought our readers were small, not very bright children. The same for such totally unnecessary phrases as "for short". No need for it, and gives even the little ones the impression they're being written down to. --Soundofmusicals (talk) 00:32, 10 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Not quite sure why this article attracts so many peculiar remarks, but we may need something further here. The first edition was anonymous - meaning not more nor less than no author's name on the title page. Since Swift was well known for this sort of thing, and since it is very much in his usual style, the secret may very well have been out pretty smartly - but the fact that anonymity was at least attempted, even if it was soon abandoned is still relevant information, factual, succinctly expressed, and not in the slightest liable to cause any real "confusion". But its a detail that, while its worth including, is hardly worth elaborating at great length, even if we could do so without speculation. --Soundofmusicals (talk) 00:55, 10 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Have you considered that attracting "peculiar remarks" might indicate a need for improvement? Parts of the article suffer from weak or awkward prose (I write for a living), but more importantly, it gives a false impression of Swift's willingness to take credit/blame for the essay. The way it reads now doesn't acknowledge that Swift ever abandoned the open secret of his authorship and put his name on it, let alone that he did so as soon as the first small printing of it sold out. This isn't like so many cases, where a mystery of authorship was eventually solved by academics (as the article now implies); it was a case where the obvious author promptly changed his mind and took ownership. (All of which transpired in 1729, not in 1728 as you incorrectly stated in your edit summary). Saying only that he "published [it] anonymously... in 1729" – when he also published it with his name on the cover that same year – is not (as you keep misquoting me) "confusing"; it is a half-truth: misinformation by omission. That accident of wording isn't a big deal, but I'd hope we could address it without so much knee-jerk defensiveness and condescension from you. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 01:37, 10 October 2017 (UTC)


 * It was a pamphlet - if it hadn't touched quite such a raw nerve the first printing could very well have been the last (the usual case with such ephemera). Pamphlets in this period were more akin to journalism than literature. The "anonymous" bit, which you wanted to cut out altogether, is quite significant. What about just adding the word "initially", or "originally" before "published"? But I still can't see that the original text is "misleading", or actually needs emendation. --Soundofmusicals (talk) 20:29, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

Delete
In my view this entire article is Not Notable at best. It is certainly not NPOV, it is not relevant in any way to the phrase "A Modest Proposal", and it seems more like an attempt to vandalise Wikipedia. In short it does not belong on Wikipedia, hence the notice. DO NOT remove this notice without a discussion on the topic.
 * &mdash;gorgan_almighty 18:11, 12 December 2005 (UTC)


 * Um, what? This is exactly where the prhase "modest proposal" comes from. It's a notable article by a notable author. Thus, I have removed the deletion notice. DS 18:49, 12 December 2005 (UTC)


 * If that is where the term "Modest Proposal" comes from then there may be a case for keeping the article. But it needs to be rewritten because in no place in the article does it actually state why this Catholic babies thing is mentioned. There is no statement that it is the origin of the phrase. The article reads more like an argument supporting the case of eating babies.
 * &mdash;gorgan_almighty 18:56, 12 December 2005 (UTC)


 * The name of the pamphlet is A Modest Proposal. And in it, the author makes a case for eating babies. I don't think it could be any clearer. &mdash; Slicing 03:25, 13 December 2005 (UTC)
 * If you think this article is about a non-notable piece of brilliant, if dark, satire that is extremely well know by the brief title "A Modest Proposal", would you also propose deletion for articles on the works of A. Conan Doyle, Charles Dickens, L. Frank Baum, and (to include other satirists Rabelais and Voltaire? wcf Facts are stubborn. Comments? 16:46, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * By the way, for future reference, articles like these do not fall under the criteria for speedy deletion. If you tag it as such and someone (most likely an administrator) removes the tag citing that it does not fall under the critiria, don't re-add the tag. If you wish for people to discuss the merits of an article and whether it should be deleted, please nominate it for deletion, where it will be debated for a week about whether the article should be kept or deleted. (Though it should be noted that this article would almost certainly pass AfD as a speedy keep.) Thanks a lot! If you have any questions, please don't hesistate to contact me. Flcelloguy (A note? ) 01:59, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Spoiler warning
Should we maybe add a spoiler warning to this article? (Eeesh 22:23, 13 March 2007 (UTC))


 * It had one for a while. I guess I don't really see the point since the spoiler warning would be wrapped around essentially the entire article, but I don't think it would hurt anything either. Dan Slotman 16:45, 14 March 2007 (UTC)


 * If A Modest Proposal needs a spoiler warning, so does Romeo and Juliet (oops! it doesn't have one! better get cracking). The very suggestion is pretty hilarious (I'm not attacking you, really! I laughed heartily). It's easily Swift's best known essay, and it's hundreds of years old. I think the cat is out of the bag. --RemoWilliams 06:56, 19 June 2007 (UTC)


 * But Romeo and Juliet wasn't exactly known for its surprises. Lots of people back then knew the story, albeit in a different form. --Raijinili 04:08, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Surely you jest. Romeo and Juliet didn't have a surprise ending? Juliet takes a potion that makes her appear as dead, and Romeo, finding her in this state, kills himself, not realizing that she's still alive and well. It's a shock ending, and probably quite unexpected at the time. You can only say it didn't have "surprises" by viewing it through a modern lens where you already know the ending.
 * But it also doesn't need a spoiler tag because it's incredibly well known and hundreds of years old... just like AMP
 * Neuralsim (talk) 17:00, 20 March 2023 (UTC)

Political Satire playing on the original idea
A humble suggestion on how to deal with the child crisis

First Dog on the Moon

Political Cartoon

https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2018/jun/23/a-humble-suggestion-on-how-to-deal-with-the-child-crisis?CMP=share_btn_fb — Preceding unsigned comment added by 123.243.223.205 (talk) 05:47, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

"Eating babies" listed at Redirects for discussion
A discussion is taking place to address the redirect Eating babies. The discussion will occur at Redirects for discussion/Log/2020 May 1 until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion. Hog Farm (talk) 00:17, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

Italics title
The title is currently in italics, but it should not be, per MOS:MINORWORK. I don't know how this can be changed. If anyone knows, please fix it. PhotographyEdits (talk) 22:43, 13 March 2022 (UTC)


 * It was published as a stand-alone chapbook (booklet), and falls under MOS:ITALICTITLE. MichaelMaggs (talk) 05:10, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
 * @MichaelMaggs Ah, I have reverted my edit. PhotographyEdits (talk) 10:54, 14 March 2022 (UTC)