Talk:A New Start (Degrassi High)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:44, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:44, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Improve the poster's non-free use rationale with this template.
 * Don't link countries (Canada/United States) per WP:OVERLINK.
 * Remove the comma after "summer romance" (serves as the pause after).
 * Same for the comma after "as early as Degrassi Junior High".
 * The last sentence in the lead needs a source.
 * All fixed, last line removed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:23, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * The sentence is still in #External_links. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:02, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * There is no external links section. Do you mean the "see also" section? ToQ100gou (talk) 01:48, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Seems that I mixed them up. Yes, that sentence needs a source. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:48, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Eh, I didn't know that sentences like that would need a source. I can just remove that line until I can find a source for the comparison. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:51, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * "first day of Degrassi High School" "first day at Degrassi High School"
 * Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "day care nearby the high school" "daycare nearby the high school"
 * Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "then blames he, Snake and Wheels" "then blames him, Snake and Wheels"
 * Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I would suggest changing uses of "..." to "[...]" (more visually pleasant).
 * That's usually to indicate that a quoted sentence was interrupted. In the show, that's how the dialogue actually goes. I can still change it. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Looks good now. Don't think we should include pauses through text. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:04, 9 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Other than that, this section passes WP:TVPLOT.

References in later episodes

 * This section should be removed (it's a TV series so the next episode would obviously reference it).
 * Removed, but the references were pretty significant and were actual plotlines so I felt that it was relevant to the article. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:01, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * do it.", typo?
 * Yes, fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:02, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "counselling session" can be reduced to simply "session" after its first use.
 * Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:02, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * "well received" "well-received"
 * "abortion plot line" "abortion plotline"
 * Both fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:03, 9 June 2021 (UTC)