Talk:A Newsboy Hero/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:51, 19 September 2015 (UTC)

Another Marie article. I should complete this tomorrow hopefully JAG  UAR   22:51, 19 September 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article
 * I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
 * "His alcoholism had caused much strife in his home and his wife" - informal
 * Salvation Army could be linked in the lead
 * " The Billboard‍ '​ review" - typo

Close - promoted
I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done  JAG  UAR   22:36, 19 September 2015 (UTC)