Talk:A Quiet Night In

Awkward sentence
"At 18 pages of stage directions, the script every joke in the episode, an exercise in planning atypical for Shearsmith and Pemberton." Er... what? --Walnuts go kapow (talk) 10:59, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, should be "the script contained every joke...". Fixed, thanks for the note. J Milburn (talk) 11:13, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Plot
Was reviewing the article before writing it up for the Signpost. I think you might want to tweak the plot a bit more, as there's two issues: 1. Kim appears out of nowhere. Checking older revisions, it appears she's the cook or housekeeper; if you just called her by her profession it would frankly be a lot clearer. Secondly, the Reception section discusses the dog's death; however, while the dog's mentioned, its death isn't actually included in the plot at the moment. It would help prepare the reader for later to finish that plot thread.

This is, on the whole, an excellent article. Plot summaries are hard, especially given it's a silent episode. A little more tweaking, and I think it'd be perfect. Adam Cuerden (talk) 23:06, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry I missed this- thanks for the comment. The article currently says "and sits down to soup brought by his housekeeper, Kim (Veheary)", so there is some introduction- I think this is sufficient. As for the dog, we currently have "Eddie accidentally throws the terrier into the window, so Ray stuffs the dog into an umbrella stand." It's not completely clear that the dog is killed, but I suppose it's pretty strongly implied; I could rephrase to "ram" instead of "stuff" to emphasise the violence? (He places it in, then stuffs it down with an umbrella- not graphic, but enough to make you grit your teeth...) Josh Milburn (talk) 23:14, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
 * The Kim point seems fixed, as for the second point, might want to say "stuffs the dog into an umbrella stand, ramming it in with an umbrella" Adam Cuerden (talk) 23:21, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm not opposed to that, but I don't like the repetition of "umbrella" (and I'd have to check to confirm it was an umbrella); as this is now an FA, I wouldn't want it to deteriorate. If you want to make the edit, I won't revert you, but I'll have a muse over how best the phrase it and make a fix once I've worked something out. Josh Milburn (talk) 23:40, 13 June 2015 (UTC)

To expand...
http://web.archive.org/web/20160505195928/http://www.colstonhall.org/shows/inside-no-9/

Hatnote
I do not wish to engage in edit warring, but what looked like a legitimate edit was being deleted without clear explanation. Porridge was one of the best known British TV series of the 1970s. A Night In is particularly remembered since the scriptwriters, Dick Clement and Ian La Frenais, set themselves the difficult task of writing an episode set almost entirely in a prison cell with only 2 characters, although they were helped by strong performances by the 2 actors, Ronnie Barker, the leading British TV comedy actor of the 1970s in what many regard as his best role, and Richard Beckinsale, a promising young actor whose career was tragically cut short by his death at only 31. When I first read this article I thought that the Porride episode was called "A Quiet Night In", as might a few people, and it easily could have been called this. I don't think it matters if someone put a lot of effort into this article, FAs can still sometimes be improved, we don't have ownership of articles. If the hatnote is not MOS-compliant feel free to make it so. PatGallacher (talk) 16:33, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
 * "If the hatnote is not MOS-compliant feel free to make it so." No, that's not how this works. If you contribute to an article, especially a featured article, it's your job to make sure that your contribution is a good one. If you are unwilling or unable to do this, you shouldn't contribute, and you certainly shouldn't edit-war to keep your addition in an article. I think your contribution is a bad one for the simple reason that the articles do not have the same title, and the difference is not merely an apostrophe or a changed spelling- they are simply different titles, whether or not you mistakenly believed that they had the same title. If you had a reliable source suggesting that the Porridge episode is sometimes called "A Quiet Night In" (mistakenly or not), this would perhaps be different. I also have to question your decision to add a hatnote to this article but not the other until much later. Josh Milburn (talk) 18:01, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

If you read the article A Night In you will see that twice in the article it mentions that the characters use the phrase "a quiet night in", so it's hardly surprising that some people might assume that this is the title of the episode. In what way is the hatnote not MOS-compliant? PatGallacher (talk) 00:35, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

See also WP:BRD-NOT and WP:OWNER. PatGallacher (talk) 23:16, 30 May 2016 (UTC)
 * When one goes straight to "WP:OWN", one is usually in the wrong. "Quiet" is a very clear disambiguator (WP:NAMB), and unless you have references that "A Night In" is sometimes known as "A Quiet Night In", then there should not be a hatnote here. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:11, 31 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I have gone and read WP:NAMB and I don't think it supports this interpretation. Sometimes we ought to use a degree of common sense about likely source of confusion. PatGallacher (talk) 18:48, 31 May 2016 (UTC)
 * How can I respond to that without risking being accused of incivility? How about this- I agree entirely with us using common sense in this discussion. Please do let us know when you intend to start. Josh Milburn (talk) 18:55, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Nobody has explained in what way this is not MOS-compliant. PatGallacher (talk) 21:05, 31 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Misuse of speech marks? Despite the fact you are a lone voice on this talk page, you have now added the hatnote to the page six times, (repeatedly) pooh-poohed the BRD cycle and made insinuations about my conduct ("WP:OWNER") and Chris's perceived lack of "common sense". Now you're choosing to ignore the issue at stake (all the while forcing the hatnote back into the article) to instead pick fault with my claims about the MOS. You're really rubbing me up the wrong way. What's the grand plan, here? You keep adding it back until I decide I don't want to remove it any more? Josh Milburn (talk) 21:21, 31 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Misuse of speech marks? You sound rather unsure.  In what way are they misused?  And what would be correct use? PatGallacher (talk) 22:49, 31 May 2016 (UTC)
 * You've already been told. The fact that you refuse to listen (nowhere in WP:NAMB does it say a parenthetical disambiguator is necessary; it simply says "In many cases it is preferable not to have a hatnote when the name of the article is not ambiguous." The use of natural disambiguation is further supported by WP:NATURALDIS Point 1). Either give some references that "A Night In" is sometimes referred to as "A Quiet Night In", or drop the stick. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:03, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

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