Talk:A Room with No View/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 08:48, 3 November 2012 (UTC)


 * I'll take this! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:48, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Discussion

 * 1
 * ""A Room With No View" featured an appearance by recurring guest star Sarah-Jane Redmond." - You discuss a returning villain in the second paragraph. Anything to do with Redmond?
 * Same person, clarified now. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Why nothing about the production in the lede?
 * The mention of Redmond's recurring role was meant to fulfil that, guess it could do with more. Let me know what it looks like now. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Who plays Gordon?
 * Added. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * tells him she loves him. - Tells Bryce or the unnamed man?
 * Bryce was the intended subject here but it is both at different times. I've clarified it. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * comforted - Is this right? Or does she confront him?
 * Yep, comforted. It's a bit creepy. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * The episode was the first to have been written by producer Ken Horton, and his only solo writing credit. - Which episode?
 * Redmond, admittedly a fan of Carter and recurring series director David Nutter, had initially auditioned for another episode of the first season - You didn't mention Chris Carter yet, so Carter comes out of nowhere. Don't forget his role in the episode.
 * Good catch. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I copyedited, be sure to check.
 * Looks good, thanks. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)


 * 3
 * Nothing whatsoever about themes?
 * Nothing as yet. There's a new book on the horizon which might help, not sure what's actually in it or not. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Spotchecks turn up no issues. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:06, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look at this one for me. GRAPPLE   X  19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Further discussion

 * On hold to fix issues indicated above. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:06, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Alright, looks peachy. Passing. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:58, 3 November 2012 (UTC)