Talk:A Simple Lie/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT.✅
 * Lead summarizes the entire article and is in great shape.

Plot

 * Add a comma after "death threats".
 * "talks sense Frieda" "talks sense to Frieda"✅
 * "check the hospital security" "check the hospital for security"✅
 * "person taking" "person from taking"✅
 * Get each part of the summary to 400 words each (first is at 411 and second at 417).✅

Production

 * "Steele told a Victoria" "Steele told Victoria"✅
 * "appear the show" "appear on the show"✅

Promotion and broadcast

 * Add commas after "However" and "the following days".✅
 * "described as the move" "described the move"✅

Reception

 * This section looks good.