Talk:A Voice in the Wilderness (Babylon 5)

Trying to fix the synopsis.
Well, I got the Part 1 summary down to 1,396 words. Unfortunately, I buy the WP guideline that a plot summary for a movie should be 300-500 words. This is a TV episode. So, it still needs work, in my opinion. Part 2, prior to editing, is 3,694 words. We'll see how how long it is after editing...
 * Well, I got it down to 2,489 words. Who's next?  --Aladdin Sane (talk) 21:59, 1 October 2009 (UTC)

The problem is, in my opinion, if the summary/synopsis is too long, you loose the audience you're trying to reach. I know I nearly fell asleep trying to read the original Part 1 summary. --Aladdin Sane (talk) 15:13, 1 October 2009 (UTC)