Talk:A Wizard of Mars

Tone and Style
This article currently is written in an essay or speaing style that is unencyclopedic. I am going to try to begin work on it and wanted to give everyone a heads up. I'm a new editor so if I'm going about this the wrong way just message me and tell me what I'm doing wrong. During the time that we're working on style I've added the Inappropriate Tone template at the top so anyone else editing realizes whats goin on. Thanks! S0unds4il0r (talk) 18:49, 9 July 2010 (UTC)