Talk:Aamir Liaquat Hussain

Death
Aamir Liaquat died on 9 June 2022 in Karachi hospital.

Death
Please change "Aamir Liaquat Hussain died on 9 June 2022 in Karachi.[97] According to a servant, he heard Liaquat scream in pain from his locked room. After inquiring and receiving no reply from him, the servant broke the door and found him unconscious. He wen taken to a private hospital in critical condition where he nthe d.ied[98]"

with the folowing as the orginal lacks grammar and vocabulary

Aamir Liaquat Hussain died on 9 June 2022 in Karachi. According to his caretaker (Javed), he found Amir Liaquat unconscious in his room. He was rushed to hospital but was declared dead at arrival. Police suspect that the cause of death was suffocating due to gases from a household generator however the confirmed cause of death has not been verified yet. 103.157.210.74 (talk) 12:57, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
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Please fix grammar in the last line of Aamir Liquat's introduction, related to his death Khan0321 (talk) 16:40, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
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