Talk:Aaron Eckhart/GA1

GA Review
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The article's in really good (or almost good?) shape at the moment, and there are only a few things I can suggest to improve the article. That's about it. You've got seven days to make necessary changes - just drop me a note when you think you're done and hopefully we'll promote the article to GA :) — 97198   talk  09:00, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Specify that "offensive coordinator" refers to American football - without looking at the film's article one could assume he worked on a lacrosse team!
 * Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Do not use the term "most recently" per WP:MOSBIO - these terms go out of date quickly, and I have no doubt that Eckhart's working on something new most of the time.
 * Has been removed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * What does "Mary M. (Lawrence) Eckhart" mean? If Lawrence is her maiden name, should it say "née Lawrence"?
 * Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:16, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Jump right into abbreviating BYU at the beginning of the Career section; it's just been established above.
 * Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:01, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Again, in Career, specify that "offensive coordinator" refers to NFL.
 * Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * "Reoccurring" -> "recurring"
 * Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:01, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I noticed the phrase "that same year" is used a lot - is there another phrase you could use to replace some instances?
 * I think I got it. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:16, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Roger Ebert "writes" or "wrote"?
 * Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:01, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * In the Filmography notes, it should be "Satellite Award", "Golden Globe Award" and "Independent Spirit Award".
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Tumble currently links to a dab page; it doesn't look like an article exists for the film.
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * For Conversations With Other Women, I suggest naming the role "Man" as like Tumble. The role is listed just as Man on IMDb.
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking care of business - I'm going to go ahead and promote. — 97198   talk  07:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much for the review. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:22, 31 July 2008 (UTC)