Talk:Aaron Hernandez/Archive 3

RfC on the Brain Damage section
Where in the article should the "Brain Damage" section be placed? More details can be found in the talk section above. --Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 13:05, 26 October 2019 (UTC)


 * Comment: In other words, this RfC is about whether or not the "Brain damage" section should come before or after the "Death" section. If it's to come before the "Death" section, there is also a question of whether or not it should be a subsection of the "Personal life" section. I feel that it should come after the "Death" section or be a part of it. The brain damage research is also now a part of his legacy. Legacy material comes after all of the general material. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 04:38, 27 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Agree I think it should stay where it is or add it at the end of the death section. Leaving it where it is maintains the chronological structure of this article, but then again maybe it doesn't need to be a section on its own and it can be included at the end of the death section. Cook907 (talk) 19:24, 30 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Agree Nobody knew about the condition when he was still alive. The details of the trauma he suffered in his lifetime merely served as contexts to the brain damage narrative. Darwin Naz (talk) 23:30, 30 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Agree Keep in place as it is now. I understand why it may seem weird to have the Brain damage section after Death at first sight, but with the very first sentence we understand that the brain damage was assessed post-mortem. So this means that the brain damage had no known influence during his lifetime, since it was not known, so placing it before Death would be a kind of reinterpretation of his life under the prism of new research, and this kind of interpretation would be WP:SYNTH in my opinion. So it's better to leave brain damage after, since this reflects more accurately how the developments went, and leaves room to post-mortem interpretations on the person's life events by the reader (but not by the editors). --Signimu (talk) 03:28, 31 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Update: in light of WhatamIdoing comment, since the brain damage is also pertinent for the Legal section, I support both that it is kept in place but also that it is integrated with other sections where pertinent . --Signimu (talk) 14:43, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
 * My issues with that suggestion are the following: Redundancy. And looking at the current "Legal issues" section, with all of its subsections, I don't see where it would smoothly fit. Yeah, we could place it at the start of the section before the subsections, but it would just seem out of place and as though we are trying to justify his actions. And why place the material there, where it can be easily overlooked, when there is a "Brain damage" section for readers to get all of the brain damage material in one area? We consolidate material in one section all the time, as seen by the current state of this article and various other Wikipedia articles. And it's usually for the best, as I think it is in this case. Even if we got rid of the "Brain damage" section and spread the material throughout, it's still the case that readers are best served having all of that material in one section rather than disjointed. In my opinion, the content should simply be a part of the "Death" section anyway. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 15:55, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I took now the time to read more carefully the source provided by WhatamIdoing, and it's still a retrospective interpretation, so as my initial comment described, I think retrospective interpretations should not be mixed with the rest, so I agree that everything can be placed in a Brain damage section at the end of the entry. It could be done differently, but I think this is both more neutral (as we don't meddle ourselves with choosing what other sections we have to modify according to retrospective interpretations of his brain damage), and less redundant (if there are multiple interpretational consequences to the brain damage, such as death and legal, subsections can be created, if there is enough content to warrant that of course). I understand what WhatamIdoing suggests, there may be other ways to present the content in an encyclopedic manner, but here the chronological order seems to me to be the most easy neutrality-proof approach. --Signimu (talk) 18:09, 1 November 2019 (UTC)


 * I think that information about the (then-undiagnosed) CTE should be integrated throughout the article. For example, the ==Legal== section ought to mention that after his death, these violent and bizarre acts have been retrospectively attributed to CTE in sources that say things like "Medical evidence showed that 27-year-old Aaron Hernandez suffered from one of the most severe cases of CTE found in a person his age. His violent history is now linked with an ongoing CTE crisis in the NFL."  (Also, that news article mentions a genetic susceptibility, which I don't find mentioned in the current version of this article.)  While it's useful to have a section that explains the CTE situation, I think that the more important task is to not stuff that information in one section.  We should not follow a strict chronological order of what was publicly known at the time various events happened.  That's a good model for a mystery story, but it's not good for an encyclopedia article.   WhatamIdoing (talk) 14:21, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Disagree, per what I stated above. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 15:55, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I agree with Flyer that we don't want too much redundancy. Some is OK, but this section is only three paragraphs long. How would you feel, and, about moving the paragraph about the lawsuit into the Death section, the other two paragraphs into the Legal problems sections, and a single sentence in the Paranoia section about how it may have been caused by CTE? --Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 17:50, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
 * For the record (although I probably don't need to state it), I wouldn't support that suggestion, per what I argued above. I just don't see how it best serves the reader to split the brain content in that way. I would be okay with the lawsuit material being moved to the "Death" section if the other brain damage material was moved there as well, with or without the "Brain damage" section being a subsection of the "Death" section. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 07:37, 2 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I don't think moving brain damage or legal sections in death section would be good, as they are not that much related. The only link is that the brain damage and one legal action (if I'm not mistaken) are done post-mortem, and that the brain damage may explain his death and interpret his lifelong actions, but that's a post-mortem guess, so a reinterpretation. I think that any order except chronological about the brain. But on second thoughts I can see how the brain damage could be directly integrated: the brain damage section could be placed very up in the entry and then the brain damage related infos pertaining to legal and death and other events could be integrated directly into the pertinent sections. I could totally see that for a historical figure, but since here this is a biography of a very recent personality, and the brain damage stuff is also very recent and not so much detailing, as the consequences are mostly assumptions, I can see that doing such an article organization would lead to conflicts, as then the editors will clearly insert post-mortem reinterpretations throughout the article, it's less neutral. --Signimu (talk) 07:58, 2 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Regarding merging the "Death" and "Brain damage" sections, it's just that (like Cook907 above) I don't see that they need to be separated. We include "after death" material in death sections all the time. Granted, it's usually only about the family members, friends, acquaintances, and sometimes also about how the public reacted. For example, the "Death" section of the Whitney Houston article currently includes a "Reaction" subsection with "Pre-Grammy party" and "Further reaction and tributes" subsections. In other cases, when a legacy section doesn't exist, legacy material may be in the "Death" section. But I'm content to let the "Death" and "Brain damage" sections stay separate in the case of the Aaron Hernandez article.
 * Regarding what you stated about reinterpretation, yeah, if we went with any such setup, I think editors would start adding "but his brain damage might have contributed to [so and so]" or similar throughout the article. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 08:19, 2 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I don't think that this information should be "separated". I think that some (not most) should be repeated (briefly) throughout the article.  Repetition is good.
 * Signimu, "neutral" on Wikipedia means "follow the sources", rather than pretending that we don't know more in 2019 than we did in 2015. If the current sources are saying "Hey, all that violence and stuff might be explained by his CTE" (and they are), then the Wikipedia article should do the same.  We should not be burying this information in a single section, especially since almost nobody will read the entire article.  If you're having trouble imagining how a (slightly) "non-chronological" form is neutral, then I want you to think about how horrible it would be for family members to read these sections without any mention of this serious mitigating factor, and ultimately how unfair that is.  I don't think that "He did all of this (probably because he was a bad man)" is more neutral in any sense than "He did all of this, and later we all learned that he was living with severe, undiagnosed brain damage of the sort known to produce that kind of behavior".  WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:40, 2 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I didn't see the factual and cold description of the events as being depicting the person as a "bad man", but I can understand how it could be perceived as such, particularly by the family, that's a very good point. I'll re-read more carefully all the sources about this issue and may reconsider my position. --Signimu (talk) 03:15, 3 November 2019 (UTC)


 * WhatamIdoing, this has nothing to do with "being 'neutral' on Wikipedia means 'follow the sources'." We do relay that "Hey, all that violence and stuff might be explained by his CTE," but we don't have it come before "all the violence" stuff or before first having a section devoted to his death. Having it in a single section called "Brain damage" is not burying it in the least. It is right there, easy for readers to locate because it is its own section. Having it in the Personal life section or any other section (except for the "Death" section) without a subheading would be burying it. Your "the poor family" argument is highly flawed and unconvincing. Similar can be stated about the poor victims. I want you to think about how horrible it would be for victims or their family members to read these sections with the impression that none of Hernandez's actions were actually his fault; it was the brain damage that did it. We do not write our Wikipedia articles based on what family members may think.
 * Per what Signimu and I have argued, you have yet to show how it makes more sense to have the brain damage information scattered about instead of within one section or that it should go in the "Personal life" section before we have an entire section commenting on his death. Like I noted in the section immediately above this, "That 'the researchers suggested that the CTE, which results in poor judgment, inhibition of impulses, or aggression, anger, paranoia, emotional volatility, and rage behaviors, may explain some of Hernandez's criminal acts and other behavior' does not negate the fact that the entire section is aftermath material with regard to his death. It is not as though the brain damage topic was an active aspect of his life. By this, I mean an active discussion in his life and something that was being looked into while he was alive. So to begin a section with this 'after his death' material and to then have a 'Death' section following that is a poor setup." Everything you are arguing is personal preference. The sames goes for others. I suggest that Signimu stick to their original thoughts on the matter. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 05:31, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Another element, according to Manual_of_Style/Biography, biographies should be presented in a chronological order, unless there is a good reason to do otherwise. I can see the merits in both points of views, but I still slightly sway towards moving to personal life, because after reading the sources themselves, I am now more convinced of the pertinence to better integrate this info in the entry. For instance, moving to personal life section while retaining the subheader would place "Brain damage" just after "Paranoia", which it complements since CTE is likely to explain the paranoia according to the sources. The most problematic point for me is that the Brain damage section is underdeveloped, apparently several researchers agree this is an exceptional case study (extreme CTE case + very young), and this info is nowhere to be found in the entry currently. But the fact according to the sources that there appears to be a scientific consensus that this condition has certainly influenced his life, although we can't be sure to what extent, is IMHO a good enough reason to not follow the chronological order for this content. --Signimu (talk) 05:57, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Per my arguments and your earlier arguments, I remain unconvinced that this material should be a part of the "Personal life" section. I just do not see that it's best for the article or readers to have the Personal life section go into extensive detail about research that was done on his brain after he died before we even present the dedicated "Death" section. The brain damage material is "after his death" material. And it is not as though the researchers know for certain that brain damage contributed to any of his behavior. They state "may" and "some of Hernandez's criminal acts and other behavior." "May have contributed to" or "may explain" is not the same thing as "did contribute to" and "does explain." The researchers don't even state "very likely did." At this point, we're going to have to agree to disagree. No need to keep repeating ourselves. I will reiterate now, though, that the brain damage material is legacy material, which is even more of a reason that it should not be a part of the "Personal life" section. I mentioned above that it's a part of his legacy and that we have these sections come after all of the general material. And below, in the collapse box, I see the following statement: "But McKee's discovery raised the prospect that Hernandez's ultimate legacy might be his damaged brain." As for the "Bran damage" section being underdeveloped, that can obviously be remedied by expanding it. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 06:26, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Your arguments are sensible, as I said above I can see the merits of your position too. I just wanted to clarify however that the scientists do agree that they are sure that CTE influenced his behavior, what is less certain is to what extent this contributed to his criminal acts (see the quotes I extracted below). But for example for his paranoia and other psychoses, there is no doubt. For the extent, it's the role of justice to statuate on this issue, and for the moment the case was dropped, so we'll probably never know. I think that whatever is the final choice for the section, this is a very important point to clarify in the article. --Signimu (talk) 22:45, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I've looked at sources on the matter, and I understand CTE. But I generally don't see scientists definitively stating "this influenced his behavior." Perhaps that's just them being careful with wording, especially since his behavior includes his criminal behavior and they typically aren't definitively saying "this influenced his criminal behavior." I see scientific agreement that it likely influenced his criminal behavior. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 08:37, 4 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Move to personal life section It is currently directly after the "Death" section, apparently because the brain damage was discovered postmortem. But it belongs adjacent, or perhaps merged with, the discussion of paranoia, which gets a subsection in the personal life section. That's just common sense. Coretheapple (talk) 17:46, 2 November 2019 (UTC) Per further comments below, I have no problem with moving personal life section below death section.  I think it would work well here, especially if it is directly below the death section. Coretheapple (talk) 14:08, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Move to personal life section per Coretheapple --Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 23:23, 2 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Move to personal life section per WhatamIdoing and Coretheapple. I further suggest to expand the section, particularly by using WhatamIdoing's ref and by mentioning that this is considered a case study in the safety of american football, and that his brain, with exceptional damages, is considered very valuable for future research on CTE. Also per WhatamIdoing suggestion, some infos could be integrated throughout the entry, for example Odin Lloyd's mother declaration following the reveal of the brain damage. See below for some pertinent quotes. --Signimu (talk) 04:04, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Coretheapple and Ozzie10aaaa, per what I stated above, I do not see why the material should be there as though the brain damage was an active discussion in his life and something that was being looked into while he was alive. That's not "personal life." And having the material come before we have a section devoted to his death is a poor setup. How at all is that better flow? As made clear above, I do think it should be merged with the Death section. And, Signimu, I don't see that WhatamIdoing argued to move the material to the "Personal life" section. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 05:31, 3 November 2019 (UTC) Updated post. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 06:26, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * There's no requirement for something to be "an active aspect of his life", meaning something that he personally knew about, for it to be included in the ==Personal life== section. Think about what such a rule would mean in other cases, such as misattributed parentage ("Personal life:  He had two kids."  "Death:  Actually, he had three kids, but he didn't know about one of them."  Or "Personal life:  His parents died when he was a baby."  "Death:  After he died, his famous father, who had written that family love was the highest good, said that he regretted putting him in an orphanage and letting him grow up believing that his parents were dead").  IMO this information should be handled in the Criticism model.  There may be a need for a fuller explanation in a separate section, but it should be mentioned throughout, much like Vincent van Gogh's health is mentioned throughout that Featured Article.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 15:49, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * This isn't about what is required. It's about what is best for this article/readers. We disagree. While there is setup consistency for Wikipedia articles (meaning biography articles are typically set up a certain way, medical articles are typically set up a certain way, and so on), what is best for articles varies. This isn't a medical article and I find it odd that WP:Med was alerted to it for input, but even WP:MEDORDER is clear about the following: "Changing an established article simply to fit these guidelines might not be welcomed by other editors. The given order of sections is also encouraged but may be varied, particularly if that helps your article progressively develop concepts and avoid repetition." And the Wikipedia:Criticism essay you linked to is clear about the following: "A section dedicated to negative material is sometimes appropriate, if the sources treat the negative material as an organic whole, and if readers would be better served by seeing all the negative material in one location." Also, even types of biography articles can have a different setup; for example, the usual way that articles about singers are set up vs. articles about actors. And articles about historical figures are often set up differently. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 08:37, 4 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Isaidnoway, I know you haven't edited since October 24th, but any thoughts on this? Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 06:26, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Combine into death section as we already talk about CTE in that section and CTE played a role in his death. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 11:00, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I prefer that. We don't actually know that CTE played a role in his death, though. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 08:37, 4 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Move to personal life section per Coretheapple and my comments in the section above. While it was not diagnosed (as it can not be) until after his death, most of the section talks about his life, not his death or the aftermath.--Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 14:17, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * It's now been over a week since the RfC was published, so I thought it might be helpful to see the results of the !vote so far.


 * Place after Death
 * Flyer22 Reborn
 * Darwin Naz
 * Cook907


 * Integrate it throughout
 * WhatamIdoing


 * Move to Personal Life
 * Slugger O'Toole
 * Coretheapple
 * Ozzie10aaaa
 * Signimu


 * Combine with Death
 * Doc James


 * It seems the two leading contenders are to either place the section after Death, or in the Personal Life section. In the interest of forming a consensus, perhaps we should now move towards trying to coalesce around one or the other of these options. What do you thing, ? --Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 14:17, 3 November 2019


 * Slugger O'Toole, RfCs stay open for a month unless they are a WP:SNOW close matter or are no longer needed after further discussion. That's the way these things go. We don't need anyone to keep tally or similar. A closer will close the RfC. Furthermore, your tally is off since, from the beginning, I've been clear that I am for the sections staying as they are (the "Brain damage" section after the "Death" section) or for the "Brain damage" section being combined with the "Death" section. Three editors initially agreed with me. One of those editors (Signimu) has so far changed their mind. So anyone who has stated "keep it where it is" or "combine with the death section" agrees with me. My vote is not at odds with Doc James's vote. And we can see that Cook907 stated above, "Leaving it where it is maintains the chronological structure of this article, but then again maybe it doesn't need to be a section on its own and it can be included at the end of the death section." It's best that you be patient and let this RfC play out without continually conducting it and proposing things. This RfC isn't about other proposals. If you feel you must suggest other proposals, it's best that you start a "Discussion" section and title this initial area the "Survey" section. See WP:Requests for comment/Example formatting. You shouldn't move any of the discussion that has taken place in this section so far to a Discussion section, though. It would be taking editors' responses out of context. Because your tally is inaccurate, has become outdated with Crossroads's vote below, would become outdated with others' votes unless continually updated, and might unfairly influence this RfC, I have put it within a collapse box. WP:Consensus on Wikipedia isn't about votes (except for matters like WP:RfAs); it's about the strength of the arguments. I stand by my arguments on this matter. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 08:37, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

I think we need a "both/and" approach to this information, not an "either/or" approach. We can have a section on his health, but that is not sufficient. We also need that information throughout the whole article. WhatamIdoing (talk) 15:51, 3 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Comment Just to expand on my previous thoughts and in reaction to subsequent suggestions; One perfectly viable approach is to place the "personal life" section, including within it a brain damage subsection, after the death section. The precedent for that (not that they are in any way analagous persons of course) is Adolf Hitler. I'm sure there are other bios with similar structure. Coretheapple (talk) 17:24, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I wouldn't be strongly opposed to that setup. But, in that case, I would suggest that the brain damage material be moved out of the "Death" section as redundant. And either way, I see no need for both sections to mention that Hernandez's brain was released to Boston University to be studied for signs of chronic traumatic encephalopathy (CTE). It's unnecessary redundancy. Just cover the brain damage material in one section. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 08:37, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes that's a good point. It seems repetitious. Coretheapple (talk) 14:05, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Place after Death per Flyer22 Reborn. The brain damage was not a known aspect of his life at the time, but is part of his legacy. This way is more logical and chronological. To put it higher up would be SYNTH-ey and POV, as though we are editorially trying to explain or excuse his behavior. Note too that it is mentioned in the lead, which is is the most read part of the article, so people already know about it going in and it is not just in that section at the end. -Crossroads- (talk) 04:10, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Crossroads, the recent sources are saying that CTE affected his behavior. A quick trip to books.google.com turned up multiple books that say crystal-clear things like "I absolutely believe his suicide was a product of CTE", or made direct connections between CTE and violent behavior, naming Hernandez as an example. Where's the SYNTH problem in accurately reflecting the most up-to-date and serious sources?  WhatamIdoing (talk) 14:46, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
 * No one size fits all I'm not fully versed on his background other than the basics, and don't have time to read all the input so far. I'll just say that the Aaron_Hernandez section about the physical and sexual abuse he suffered as a child is currently under his "Early life" section, although I'm guessing it didn't come out until after his death or late in his life.  And there's nothing wrong that it's not in the chronological order that it was made public. It helps put perspective on his life, so that's the reason it's placed earlier, and not say later in "Personal life".  Similarly, his CTE and concerns with brain trauma might be placed earlier as well—or even interspersed—to provide proper perspective.  However, it needs to be written neutrally, and I can also see deciding to leave it separate if a consensus on NPOV wording cannot be reached.—Bagumba (talk) 11:54, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I agree that we shouldn't force this story into "the chronological order that it was made public". "The chronological order in which it happened" would be more appropriate.  IMO we should place the various events into their proper context, in the reality-based order instead of the publicity-based order.   WhatamIdoing (talk) 14:18, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Neutral - I agree with Bagumba on perspective. There are a lot of details that have been added to his early life and personal life sections that were not previously known while he was alive, and only became known after his death due to extensive reporting by the Boston Globe and his brother's book. There's already a paragraph in his personal life section that starts out - Following Hernandez's death, so I kind of disagree with the arguments that just because the (CTE) was not known at the time, necessarily means it can't be included in his personal life section. But, I also wouldn't object to the status quo of leaving it after the death section, as I kind of agree with those arguments of it being part of his legacy. Hence, neutral. Isaidnoway (talk)  15:41, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Bagumba, Isaidnoway, and others, reporting on details (like the Boston Globe does) that his brother says happened during his life is significantly different than reporting on his CTE maybe having contributed to some of his criminal acts, though. I understand placing abuse material based on his brother's book in his "Early life" section, for example. But adding speculation regarding his CTE at different parts in the article? I'm just not seeing that as best, for reasons I've gone over. As discussed before, there also appears to be excessive or WP:Undue material included from his brother's book. No need to ping me if you reply. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 14:01, 15 November 2019 (UTC)


 * After, or merged with death since it was revealed as part of post-mortem. Pincrete (talk) 13:06, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Place After Death as has already been said, it fits best in chronological order and is narratively neutral. Based on some of the comments above, I sense that there is consensus for Coretheapple's compromise, i.e. putting the "personal life" section after the "death" section in order to satisfy both those who favor it in the "personal life" section and those who favor it after the "death" section.Funtoedit1212 (talk) 07:59, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 17 January 2020
In the section titled Brain Damage, CTE symptoms are listed, but one is the opposite of what it should be.

“Inhibition of impulses” should read “lack of inhibition of impulses” or “impulse control problems”

Mayo Clinic source: https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/chronic-traumatic-encephalopathy/symptoms-causes/syc-20370921

Boston U source (leading researcher): http://www.bu.edu/cte/about/frequently-asked-questions/ 184.103.41.182 (talk) 05:45, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting wait.svg Already done Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 17:13, 25 January 2020 (UTC)

Citation overkill
Slugger O'Toole, regarding this and this, why are you engaging in citation overkill? WP:Citation overkill has solid advice on this. You nominated this article for WP:GA status. Well, with a good reviewer, the citation overkill would be one of the first things to go. I don't want to have to start an RfC on this as well. Flyer22 Frozen (talk) 01:24, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
 * , WP:Citation overkill is only an essay. Given that all the references as list defined, there's no worry about marking the edit window cluttered. Hernandez also clearly has notability, so no concerns there. There's no concern about trying to prove a point or demonstrate notability of the claim, nor is there an attempt here to shoehorn a desired source into the article. Most importantly, however, there has been no explanation of why those two sources should be included while the others should be excluded. I am going to revert for now, but if you can change the longstanding consensus to include all sources then I would gladly abide by it. -- Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 01:29, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Slugger O'Toole, it's an essay that is widely adhered to. In addition to the policies and guidelines on this site, we also use common sense. This is why, for example, we don't place 20 citations beside a single sentence. In this particular case, it's not 20, but it's overkill, which is why one editor cut down on the overkill before I did. I have reverted you again. Do you really think that experienced editors are going to agree to this citation overkill if I start an RfC on this? There isn't even any need for bundling references in this case. The current state of this article is not GA material, I can tell you that, and you make it worse with citation overkill antics like this.


 * On a side note, no need to ping me to this talk page. I won't ping you either. Flyer22 Frozen (talk) 01:38, 25 March 2020 (UTC)


 * Notability has nothing to do with this. And there is no longstanding consensus to engage in citation overkill at this article. There's also been no discussion about including all the references currently in the article. Flyer22 Frozen (talk) 01:50, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
 * There have been six citations on that sentence since November 2018. You have made almost 50 edits to the article since then. That's a WP:SILENT consensus for including all of them. I'm not going to edit war over this, but I haven't seen a new consensus form that we should remove them, or any explanation for why we should include those two but not any of the others.
 * Also, I use reply link to respond to comments, which automatically adds a notification. I'll try to remember to remove it when addressing you. -- Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 14:20, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
 * I originally removed the cites on the grounds of citation overkill. I don't see any reason for why you would want the 6 citations to remain. Using too many citations makes the article cluttered and harder to read. Removing the citation does not take any credibility away from the statement. Having 3 reliable sources is enough. -TrynaMakeADollar (talk) 23:37, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
 * I originally removed the cites on the grounds of citation overkill. I don't see any reason for why you would want the 6 citations to remain. Using too many citations makes the article cluttered and harder to read. Removing the citation does not take any credibility away from the statement. Having 3 reliable sources is enough. -TrynaMakeADollar (talk) 23:37, 25 March 2020 (UTC)


 * As seen by the discussion above, I and others have issues with this article. That we didn't try to challenge you, or repeatedly challenge you, on things doesn't mean that we agree to whatever current state the article is in. Obviously. Also, an editor can easily overlook an issue and not notice it until another editor highlights it. Flyer22 Frozen (talk) 03:29, 26 March 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 9 February 2021
Aaron — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:191:8401:AF0:0:0:0:81CB (talk) 22:20, 9 February 2021 (UTC)

Cite errors
Lots of cite errors. Please fix. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.139.156.94 (talk) 17:58, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

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Tight end overhaul
Pats opted not to re-sign Watson and released baker not the other way around 32.208.201.70 (talk) 07:09, 21 March 2022 (UTC)

Number and drug deal paragraph
Earlier today removed | the paragraph below.

During training camp, wide receiver Chad Johnson arrived in a trade from the Bengals. Hernandez immediately let Johnson, who then legally had the last name "Ochocinco" based on his uniform number, have the No. 85, choosing to go back to his college number of No. 81, which was worn in 2010 by wide receiver Randy Moss, but became available after Moss was traded to the Minnesota Vikings in 2010. Johnson and Hernandez both claimed no compensation was arranged and the transaction was a kind gesture between teammates and nothing more. Hernandez's attorney, Jose Baez, claimed Hernandez saw an opportunity after the arrival of Johnson and offered No. 85 to Johnson for $75,000. It was claimed by Baez that Johnson countered with a $50,000 offer that Hernandez accepted. The money was reportedly used to finance a wholesale marijuana purchase by Hernandez for his cousin's husband, T.L. Singleton, who later paid Hernandez back $120,000 for the loan.

It was a good faith edit, but I thought the content was relevant and solidly sourced, so I reverted. Instead of taking it to talk, Rockchalk717 simply removed it again. Rather than edit war, I now bring it to community for discussion. Should this paragraph, or something like it, be included? -- Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 17:22, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Per WP:ONUS, just because it's sourced doesn't mean it should be included. Additionally, it's on the person seeking inclusion of content to receive a consensus, not the person removing it so I did nothing wrong by reverting again without a discussion. Second, players change numbers all the time. Mentioning it every time someone does isn't entirely critical and seems more trivial than anything. And the fact that the word "reportedly" is being used about what happened to the money is actually proof it's just speculation. Hernandez or Chad Johnson neither one confirmed what happened to the money, instead it was his lawyer a year a half after his death.-- Rockchalk 717 19:39, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
 * There has been a consensus for 9.5 years to include that information. You are the one seeking to make a change, so the onus is on you to change the consensus first. Additionally, best practice here is WP:BRD. You were Bold and made an edit. I Reverted. The next step for you would be to Discuss the issue here on the talk page, not edit war back to your preferred version.
 * As to the substance of the matter, this wasn't just any number change. He sold the number and used the money to finance a drug deal. That's not your average swapping of jerseys. It's worth mentioning. I hope we get some more voices contributing here. --Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 19:51, 13 December 2022 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: English 102
— Assignment last updated by Guevarab1 (talk) 18:31, 14 March 2023 (UTC)

Introduce death before discussing posthumous legal appeals
I have moved the section about posthumous legal appeals to after the section about the subject's death. Reading the article for the first time, I knew he was dead, but it was very jarring to read about posthumous activities before even introducing the events of his death. If legal stuff really needs to be in the same section, it needs to introduce the death before talking about what happened after. —dgies tc 16:43, 14 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Dgies moved the section discussing Hernandez's posthumous legal appeal to appear after the section on his death. I reverted, saying that I understand the thought process, but I think all the legal affairs topics belong together. Rather than come to talk, simply reverted back. I am glad she decided to come to talk, but unless and untill a new consensus is formed, the original version should remain.
 * That said, it is true that the mention of the appeal comes before the section on his death, but this article is laid out thematically, not chronologically. For example, the section on his death comes before the section about his finance and daughter. This subsection on his appeal more closely aligns with the legal affairs section than the death section. Plus, anyone who read the lede will already know he is dead anyway.
 * Finally, the first sentence of that section reads "After Hernandez' death, on April 25, 2017, his lawyers filed a motion at Massachusetts Superior Court in Fall River to vacate his murder conviction." (emphasis added). His death is introduced before there is talk of the appeal. -- Slugger O&#39;Toole (talk) 17:00, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Murder Victim info
Someone add the first name of his Odin Lloyd as right now it only says his name is “Lloyd.” Also it says he’s a “semi professional player” but doesn’t say in what sport. He played football so it would also be nice if it said “semi professional football player”. Just a few errors I noticed reading this page 2601:545:8001:8FE0:69DE:6F59:A6D0:B6 (talk) 21:31, 28 July 2023 (UTC)

Remove link
In the pretrial section it's linked to a historic jail in Rhode Island, however the jail he was at was located in Bristol County, Massachusetts. Don't believe me? Here's proof. Thomasthedarkenguine (talk) 05:38, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ I removed the link Closhund  /talk/  00:46, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Thomasthedarkenguine (talk) 09:07, 14 August 2023 (UTC)