Talk:Aaron Martin (footballer, born 1989)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:58, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Merge first and second para of lead.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Martin began" -> He began...
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 * "with Conference South club" non-League.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "He joined Coventry" re-joined...
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "with Bournemouth at" no longer A.F.C. but just AFC.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Is there an article for loan?
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Saints manager" not sure our readers know who "Saints" are.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "2010–11 campaign" campaign inside pipe link. Same for subsequent "season"/"campaign" links.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "in the FA Cup on" third round of
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 * "substitute" link.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "was signed Martin then" comma after signed.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "as the Eagles manager" not sure who those are.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "League One side Coventry City, where" overlinked.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "impressed Sky Blues" who?
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "transfer embargo" link?
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "at set pieces and" link.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "in English football history" I guess this is in professional football?
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "his penalty when" link penalty kick.
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 * "free transfer" is there a link?
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "family home in Southampton." overlinked.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * " 6 feet 3 inches " adj=on.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * BBC Sport consistent format/link in refs.
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 * Ref 8 en-dash.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Refs 13, 48, too.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Ref 22, Southampton F.C. linked, no other publisher/works linked.
 * Done.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Excellent, many thanks.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)