Talk:Aaron Valero

Move?
Is Valero his last name? If so, why is the title not Aaron Valero? NickelShoe 19:13, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for your comment. Valero is his last name. Can yopu help me make the change, or better can you please do the change yourself?!

I have done the Wuikipedia " clean up" on this article. Whats your opinion?

Thanks again for your time and help.

ron.

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 * User:Merovingian went ahead and moved it already. All you have to do is use the "move" button at the top of the page.


 * Yeah, the article looks okay. It could still use some work, maybe integrating the timeline into the article and putting Valero's notability into the first sentence.  Like, when I look him up, I want to know first what he's known for, not who his parents are.


 * You're welcome for the help. By the way, you can automatically sign posts on talk pages, leaving a time/date stamp by entering ~ . NickelShoe 16:08, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for remarks. I will do some more editing based on your observations.

I am not very good at this so i will ask you to go over it again after i am done. ron """"
 * I mean you don't have to do it. Someone else already did it.  But if you ever need to move another page, there's a button at the top. NickelShoe 18:48, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
 * I mean i will do the Valero notability into the first sentence, and try to integrate the timeline too.

ron """"

Article Edited & Complete
I've edited this article, based on comments seen on the boards. Please "post" article now into the encyclopedia, as I think it's complete and in good shape.
 * All articles are in the encyclopedia, whether they're done or not. They also remain open for editing.  Even the best articles get frequent tweaking.


 * (Do remember the tildes ( ~ ) to sign your posts on talk pages. On standard American keyboards it's next to the 1.) NickelShoe 04:03, 2 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Can we now remove the "clean-up " tag from this article; it looks complete to me.Is NickelShoe still monitoring this article?

[User: ronval] 15:07, 06 Feb.2006 (GMT) 80.178.137.137 15:15, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

I'm no kind of authority. You can remove it if you think. I am still a little put off by the bulleted list, but I wouldn't stick the tag back on if you took it off. NickelShoe 17:38, 6 February 2006 (UTC) Sourcing:

There is a new tag on this article. I would like to respond to its request and add some bibliography:

Kark and Glass,"The Valero Family:Seven Generations in Jerusalem,1800-1949" Gefen Publishing House,2005.

Levy, " The History of Medicine in the Holy Land" 1799-1948", Hakibbutz Hameuchad Publishing House and B.Rappaport Faculty of Medicine, Technion-Israel Institute of Technology, Haifa, 1998.

Hurwich," Military Medicine in Israel, the pre-state years, 1911-1948 " Ministery of Defence Publishing House, 1977.

Web site: http://pard.technion.ac.il/archives/presseng/Html/PR14_5_Valero.html (Technion-israel Institute of Technology, Division of Public Affairs and Resource Development.)

These should, to my opinion, fill the demand for sourcing the article. If so, could you pls. help in inserting them to the article? 80.178.7.225 11:10, 10 February 2006 (UTC)

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