Talk:Abe Mickal/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * For an article of this length the lead should be two good paras long, covering all the major points of the article.
 * ✅ Lizard  (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Will give a careful read once this is done.


 * Early life
 * It is good to begin thee article (part after lead) with the full name of the person.
 * ✅ Lizard  (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * "The elder Mickal" sounds a bit too informal, you can stick to "father"
 * ✅ Lizard  (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * College
 * For years it was known as the "longest scoring pass in the South." Who do you quote here?
 * I just went ahead and removed it. It was dubious anyway. Lizard  (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 *  He later said that if he had accepted the senatorship When did he say this?
 * ✅ Specified. It was worded oddly in source. Lizard  (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Later life
 * Any clear reason behind his death?
 * The only thing I could find was that he "passed away peacefully." Should I assume natural causes? Lizard  (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Better remain silent here. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 07:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

No dablinks, no copyvio detected, external links are in order, images are proper. That's it from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:27, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Great, happy to promote this. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 07:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)