Talk:Abortion in Kenya

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 21 January 2020 and 7 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Moiramora131. Peer reviewers: Solrprstge.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2020 and 18 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Lgt1500. Peer reviewers: Jgar139.

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Student Review
The “P” in Legislative policy needs to be capitalized as it is a title. The “African Population and Health Research Center” has a link that takes the viewer to an editing mode. To resolve this, either delete the link or create the page as not to confuse a reader. The video gives context and visual support to the article. It would be beneficial to have a “context” section to discuss the cultural relative issues that add to the tension of abortion and sources of unwanted pregnancies in greater detail. Links 1, 2, and 7 do not work as the pages were either taken down or errored. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Solrprstge (talk • contribs) 23:41, 12 March 2020 (UTC)
 * if the reader is confused about a link going to a not yet created article than they should learn on that very same page that Wikipedia is a collaborative project where readers such as themselves can become editors and create that missing content. You, for instance, could have looked up the working link to the legislative text and fixed the dead link yourself. I disagree that the P in the header "Legislative policy" should be capitalized. It's not a name, only proper names and the beginning of sentences should be capitalized. Lastly I also disagree that a context section is very feasible for an encyclopedia. We do not editorialize and have to rely on secondary sources for factual statements. See What Wikipedia is not 1Veertje (talk) 10:22, 13 March 2020 (UTC)

Addition by User:Moiramora131
Hi , I've moved your contribution to your sandbox. It's not a bad start but it still needs work. Please try to learn how to insert a reference. Vaguely referring to some survey is not good enough. Try to use more encyclopedic language. 1Veertje (talk) 22:09, 25 March 2020 (UTC)