Talk:About Love (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 13:56, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

So we meet again; will review soon --K. Peake 13:56, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Link to the lyric video in the infobox; see "Violent Crimes" as an example of how to do so
 * "for the soundtrack to the 2020 American film To All the Boys: P.S. I Still Love You." → "from the soundtrack to American film, To All the Boys: P.S. I Still Love You (2020)." with the appropriate target
 * "and the song's producers from Captain Cuts, consisting of Ben Berger, Ryan McMahon, and Ryan Rabin." → "and Captain Cuts, which consists of Ben Berger, Ryan McMahon, and Ryan Rabin; the trio also handled the song's production."
 * "as the soundtrack's lead single for digital download and streaming" → "for digital download and streaming as the soundtrack's lead single"
 * "prior to its release and coincided" → "prior to its release, which coincided"
 * "of a North American concert tour, which was" → "of a United States concert tour that was"
 * "and the unpredictable nature of love." → "and the unpredictability of love."
 * "confesses her love" → "confesses about love"
 * "from music critics. It was called catchy" → "from music critics; it was called catchy"
 * "some labelled it as a highlight on the accompanying soundtrack." → "labelled by some as a highlight of the To All the Boys: P.S. I Still Love You soundtrack."
 * "in Belgium," → "in Belgium's Wallonia region,"
 * All ✅ – Carbrera (talk) 18:08, 15 October 2020 (UTC).

Background and release

 * "and releasing her fourth new studio album," → "and releasing her fourth studio album"
 * Target singles to Single (music)
 * "and included "Baby" with Clean Bandit and Luis Fonsi." → "and included the Clean Bandit and Luis Fonsi collaboration "Baby" (2018)."
 * "To promote the project, she embarked" → "For promotion, she embarked"
 * "and released the extended play" → "and released her sixth extended play"
 * "She also teased work on an" → "Marina also teased that she was working on an"
 * "when it was listed" → "where it was listed"
 * "The soundtrack is the first album produced" → "The soundtrack is the first album to be produced"
 * "franchise.[11] Also, "About Love" marked" → "franchise,[11] while "About Love" marked"
 * "first new song release since" → "first release of new music since"
 * "and the song's three producers," → "alongside its three producers"
 * "and Ryan Rabin, as part of" → "and Ryan Rabin; they make up the trio of"
 * "who produced the single" → "with them contributing production to the single"
 * ""About Love" appears during..." the second and third sentences of the following section should be here instead as well as the img; replacing the final scene part but keeping ending credits since that is not written in the later area and I will help with the prose when I get to that section
 * "as the soundtrack's lead single for digital download and streaming" → "for digital download and streaming as the soundtrack's lead single"
 * "on 7 February 2020 through Capitol Records." → "on 7 February 2020, through Capitol Records."
 * "Marina also announced additional" → "Marina announced additional"
 * "as a result of the" → "as a result of the ongoing"
 * "a promotional lyric video was" → "an accompanying promotional lyric video was"
 * Remove "that appear in the film" bit, as it is not backed up by the source
 * "intended for radio airplay," → "intended to receive radio airplay," with the wikilink

Composition and lyrics

 * "portrayed by Vietnamese-born American actress Lana Condor (shown)." → "who is portrayed by Vietnamese-born American actress Lana Condor (pictured)." on the img main text
 * "and a love song with" → "and a love song, with"
 * Where does the source mention climax?
 * Wikilink protagonist
 * "is describing her personal opinions" → "describes her personal opinions"
 * "love interest, Peter, played by" → "love interest Peter, who is played by"
 * "described "About Love" as" → "described the song as"
 * Second para should be merged with the first
 * "The key of the song is in C major" → "The song is composed in the key of C major"
 * "of a verse, followed by a pre-chorus, chorus," → "of a verse being followed by a pre-chorus, chorus," with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT and target
 * Wikilink post-chorus
 * "Throughout the song's" → "During the song's"
 * "her vocal range advances" → "Marina's vocal range advances"
 * Target mixed to Audio mixing (recorded music)
 * Target mastering to Mastering (audio)
 * Remove wikilink on Clean Bandit
 * "opens the song with:" → "opens the song with the lyrics:"
 * Where does that source mention the lyrics?
 * The link requires a subscription to look at the sheet music in its entirety; I added the URL subscription access template to the citation. Carbrera (talk) 04:26, 16 October 2020 (UTC).


 * "it up for nothing"." → "it up for nothing.""
 * "in the chorus; she admits:" → "in the chorus, admitting:"
 * "hurts so much"." → "hurts so much.""

Reception

 * Idolator should not be italicised anywhere in this section
 * "in anticipation of the new single:" → "in anticipation of the single:"
 * "music critics gave positive reviews of the track." → "the track was met with generally positive reviews from music critics."
 * "claiming that:" → "stating that:"
 * "we’re in for a serious treat;" he also described" → "we're in for a serious treat." He also described"
 * Remove the introduction to Leo Sigh
 * "darned catchy"." → "darned catchy.""
 * "of the film's soundtrack;" → "of the soundtrack;"
 * The statements of this review are not backed up by the source
 * I revised the content used here. Carbrera (talk) 18:01, 15 October 2020 (UTC).


 * "reached the official" → "appeared on the official"
 * "In the Wallonia region," → "In the country's Wallonia region,"
 * All ✅ – Carbrera (talk) 18:01, 15 October 2020 (UTC).

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Wikilink Captain Cuts
 * All ✅ – Carbrera (talk) 18:02, 15 October 2020 (UTC).

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Target streaming to Streaming media
 * All ✅ – Carbrera (talk) 18:08, 15 October 2020 (UTC).

Final comments and verdict

 * for this short article but do not feel afraid to ping me if you have any queries! --K. Peake 10:48, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ after your somewhat late response, but mention me next time because I have had a lot going on during this GAN backlog on Wiki. --K. Peake 09:43, 16 October 2020 (UTC)