Talk:About a Girl (Sugababes song)/GA1

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Reviewer: 1111tomica ( talk · contribs) 02:11, 29 January 2012 (UTC)


 * References number 50 and 51 are dead. However, there are not disambiguation links. —  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * They are not dead. I just viewed them. Till I Go Home (talk) 11:07, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
 * There was mash-up with the numbers. This and this are dead. And now I checked number 50 is also dead. —  Tomica     (talk)   11:17, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Well I replaced the 2nd one, but I can't find a reliable source to replace 1st. Till I Go Home (talk) 11:28, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but you will have to remove the information then. —  Tomica     (talk)   12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * No issues—  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * known by his stage name RedOne ---> better known by his stage name RedOne
 * I can see that "About a Girl" is repeating a lot in the first paragraph. Try something like the song, the single. —  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Critics were divided in their reviews for "About a Girl" ---> Music critics were divided in their reviews of "About a Girl. —  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * and also became a moderate success in Poland ---> ...and also achieved a moderate success in Poland —  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Where is Vasquez Rocks? I think you should add near Los Angeles.—  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Why there is not information in the lead for the live performances? It should summarize the whole article. —  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

✅ all addressed. Till I Go Home (talk)
 * Background and release
 * produceers ---> producers —  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * "About a Girl" was re-recorded to feature the vocals of new member Jade Ewen and the removal of the vocals by ex-member Buchanan for the release of Sweet 7 in 2010. ... It needs clarification. —  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * "About a Girl" was later digitally released on 8 November, 2009. Which version? The new right?—  Tomica     (talk)   18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Jay-Z's picture should be aligned to the right and also (pictured) is needed in the caption. —  Tomica     (talk)   13:00, 9 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Composition and lyrical interpretation
 * while the song itself is composed in the key of F. ---> which F? Major, minor? —  Tomica     (talk)   12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
 * although the middle eight has a "90s dance-inspired" feel to it ---> with its middle eight also containing some "90s dance-inspired" feel to it. —  Tomica     (talk)   12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
 * link Girls Aloud —  Tomica     (talk)   12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * and a terrific, 90s dance-inspired middle 8.". ---> Repeating of the middle 8 + spot the other mistake;) !—  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
 * OH HAHAHA. It took me like ten minutes to realise what you were talking about. Till I Go Home (talk)
 * "Get Sexy" should be linked in composition and unlinked here. —  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I also think there are some terms that have to be linked. —  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Lady Gaga - linking —  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Sweet 7 - repetition, change in the album or whatever. —  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Chart Performance
 * in the top 40 ---> in the charts Top 40—  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Music video
 * All in all looks good, just add Los Angeles when mentioning the Vasquez Rocks —  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * Looks good.—  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Other sections
 * Also good look.—  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Release history
 * The reference goes to the region where is released.—  Tomica     (talk)   12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)


 * References


 * 1. and all the other Digital Spy references, remove Digital Spy from the title
 * 9. Not Discogs.com, just Discogs is fine, the same as other from this type
 * 12. Needs space between Digital Spy and Hachette Filipacchi
 * 13. Does Drowned in Sound has publisher?
 * 15. Publisher is Rovi Corporation
 * 16. Publisher is Independent Print Limited
 * 37. work=Daily Mirror | publisher= Trinity Mirror
 * 38. work=Daily Mail | publisher= Daily Mail and General Trust
 * 43. Un-italicize BBC
 * 45. Same as 38
 * 47. work=The Sun | publisher= News International
 * Some of the references don't have dates or accessdates. Please add it.
 * 49. Billboard is work, and Prometheus Global Media is publisher

They need some work. Putting it now on hold. —  Tomica     (talk)   22:37, 13 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Aside from number 1, I fixed them all. Digital Spy includes the name in the title so no reason to remove. Till I Go Home (talk)
 * It looks awkward having the Digital Spy, two times in the references, but nevermind its your choice here. I am passing the article. Next time, this is well intentioned advice, work more on the references, before nominating the article, and of course keep the good work like now:D ! —  Tomica     (talk)   10:32, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
 * THANKYOU :P. Till I Go Home (talk)