Talk:Abrahams Creek/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will get to this in a few days. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)


 * Any linking possible in the names of the major soils and rock formations?
 * Done.


 * What is "Mohican"?
 * Linked for a second time.


 * You may link the terms linked in the lead again in the main text.
 * Done.


 * At present, Abrahams Creek has no officially named tributaries As of when exactly?
 * As of now.
 * Even then we should say "as of 2016". Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:30, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
 * But that makes it sound like it is subject to frequent change, which it really isn't. --Jakob (talk)  aka Jakec  15:43, 2 April 2016 (UTC)


 * A note on what "impaired" means here? it is not considered by the Pennsylvania Department of Environmental Protection to be impaired
 * Should be apparent to anyone who knows what the word "impaired" means. It's not a rare word.
 * I mean a note on "impaired water body". I recall discussing it in one of our earlier reviews. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:30, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I know, we did talk about it, but I've had second thoughts since then. As I said, anyone who knows what impaired means should get the gist. --Jakob (talk)  aka Jakec  15:43, 2 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Use convert templates for "cubic feet per second" and "milligrams per liter"?
 * Done.


 * Can "sediment" be linked in the lead as well?
 * Done.


 * "Mouth" is linked way too late.
 * It's linked in the infobox.
 * Then let us remove this late link. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:30, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I thought you said it was fine to have repeat the link once in the body? --Jakob (talk)   aka Jakec  15:43, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Sure but please link it at first mention in the main text, under Course. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 16:36, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. --Jakob (talk)  aka Jakec  11:45, 3 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Are "pond" and "flooding" not too common to be linked?
 * It's an edge case really, but removed.


 * Abrahams Creek Watershed Assessment and Project Prioritization Is this a report or a book? State this clearly.
 * It's the reference, and I don't particularly think it needs to be stated.

Thanks for your cooperation. I believe the article meets the GA criteria now. Pleased to promote this. Great job! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 07:21, 4 April 2016 (UTC)