Talk:Absolutely (Story of a Girl)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 17:17, 17 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Grabbing this for review. Will get to it later in the week. Most likely either tomorrow (i.e. Thursday) or Friday if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 17:17, 17 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Infobox and lead
 * Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
 * For this part (and Nine Days became one-hit wonders.), I think that it should be “became a one-hit wonder” as you are talking about the band, which is singular.


 * Background
 * I would link Nine Days in the first use in the body of the article.
 * For this part (said Hampson in a later interview.), I would clarify the year in which the interview was conducted to the prose.
 * I would revise this sentence (Frustrated, they continued to write before Hampson wrote “Absolutely”.) to avoid the repetition of the word “write” in such close proximity.
 * Please add the link for “hit single” as done in the lead.
 * I think that “one-hit wonders” should be singular rather than plural as it is referencing the band as a whole, not the individual band members.


 * Writing and composition
 * For this part (with Impose), I would add a short descriptive phrase to describe the publication to an unfamiliar audience.


 * Critical reception
 * Great work here.


 * Commercial performance
 * Is there any further information on the cover by Four Year Strong, such as critical reception?


 * Final thoughts
 * Great work with this article. I will pass this after my comments are addressed. Aoba47 (talk) 22:31, 17 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey, thanks ! I fixed everything you suggested (good call on write/wrote). I couldn't find a review or any info on that cover version besides ones from non-reputable sources. Thanks again. Saginaw-hitchhiker (talk) 22:54, 17 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 23:00, 17 January 2018 (UTC)