Talk:Abu Mansur Wahsudan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:28, 9 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * One para instead of two with one of a single sentence: merge what's there.
 * Think I did it? --HistoryofIran (talk) 16:28, 17 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "from 1025 to" but infobox has (?) there so that implies a level of uncertainty not indicated by the prose.
 * It is; "This likewise contradicts coin findings, with one struck in Wahsudan's name in 1016, which suggests that he became ruler between 1014–1016." Sorry if this is a bit confusing, but I'm grasping a straws with the limited information there is x). --HistoryofIran (talk) 16:33, 17 September 2021 (UTC)


 * What's a "suzerainty"?
 * Changed to authority. --HistoryofIran (talk) 16:28, 17 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Where is his "issue" (in the infobox) referenced?
 * In the bottom of the reign section. Also added the last son. --HistoryofIran (talk) 16:35, 17 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "sixty panegyric qasidas" what are they? Could we add a footnote explaining these highly jargonised terms?
 * "against the Ispahbadh of Mughan. The Ispahbadh was" bit repetitive.
 * "1037/8"->"1037/38"
 * "1040/1" likewise.
 * "1041/2," similar.
 * And "1232/3".
 * "1058/9" last one I think.
 * Abu Nasr Husayn II	is shown in succession box as predecessor, but the infobox and text demonstrate that's uncertain.
 * Yeah the infobox is kinda limited in that regard. That's about the best way I could explain it. --HistoryofIran (talk) 16:31, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:27, 17 September 2021 (UTC)