Talk:Academia de Prospecto Complex

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I've compiled a list of sources that will be useful for this Wikipedia page that I will include here:

1."Indians Open New Facility in Dominican Republic." The Official Site of the Cleveland Indians. Accessed October 05, 2017. http://cleveland.indians.mlb.com/news/press_releases/press_release.jsp?ymd=20110516&content_id=19134480&vkey=pr_cle&fext=.jsp&c_id=cle.

2.Guevara, Arturo J. Marcano, and David P. Fidler. Stealing lives: the globalization of baseball and the tragic story of Alexis Quiroz. Bloomington, Ind.: Indiana Univ. Press, 2003.

3.Severino, Luis. "My Journey to the Bronx | By Luis Severino." The Players' Tribune. September 05, 2017. Accessed October 05, 2017. https://www.theplayerstribune.com/luis-severino-yankees-my-journey-to-the-bronx/.

4. Bouchet, Adrien, Michael Troilo, and Jon Welty Peachey. "Major League Baseball and the Dominican Republic: What is in the best interest of the players?." Sport Management Review (Elsevier Science) 16, no. 2 (May 2013): 236-250. SPORTDiscus with Full Text, EBSCOhost (accessed September 28, 2017).

5. Gregory, Sean. "Struck Out by Béisbol." Time 176, no. 4 (July 26, 2010): 44-49. Academic Search Complete, EBSCOhost (accessed October 6, 2017).

6.Gordon, Ian. "Inside Major League Baseball’s Dominican Sweatshop System." Mother Jones. June 24, 2017. Accessed October 05, 2017. http://www.motherjones.com/politics/2013/03/baseball-dominican-system-yewri-guillen/.

7.Hanlon, Ryan S. "School's Out Forever: The Applicability of International Human Rights Law to Major League Baseball Academies in The Dominican Republic." Pacific Mcgeorge Global Business & Development Law Journal 26, no. 1 (January 2013): 235-258. Academic Search Complete, EBSCOhost (accessed October 6, 2017).

8.Klein, Alan M. Growing the game: the globalization of major league baseball. New Haven, CT: Yale University Press, 2008.

9."Calendario Boca Chica North." Dominican Summer League. May 10, 2017. Accessed October 19, 2017. http://www.dominicansummerleague.com/www/boca-chica-north/.

10. "Major League Club academies in the DR." Major League Baseball. Accessed October 19, 2017. http://mlb.mlb.com/dr/academies.jsp.

JosephJT (talk) 02:55, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Since I am the one who is primarily working on creating this article, my work is less about improvements than it is about creation. I will be filling in all the most relevant information about the baseball academy. As with all Wikipedia articles, it will start with a paragraph briefly describing the baseball academy itself. From there I would like to have a section on its history/creation, which probably will not end up being too long as the academy was created in 2011. I'd like to include a section offering a description of the academy and its facilities, as well as the DSL teams that use it. After that I would like to have another section outlining some of the head staff that operates the academy. Finally, I will try to wrap up the article by connecting it to the articles about the DSL and the DSL Indians.

JosephJT (talk) 21:09, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): JosephJT. Peer reviewers: Jovi KB, Bherrington21.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 16:48, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Kyrsten's Peer Review
I think the fact that you are creating this page is very impressive and a big task. After looking at some of your sources, I would say to be careful and observant for bias. For example, one of your sources is a press release which are typically made for the public and could leave out crucial information. Also another one of your sources is an individual player's journey so just make sure you show other points of view. As someone who is unaware of what the DSL, I think it will be very beneficial to explain to the reader what it is as well as other terms that may be novel to the average person. Your circumstance is different than others so I would also make sure you're staying on topic since you have a lot of freedom with your blank page.

Jovi KB (talk) 17:36, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

Kyrsten's Second Peer Review
I think the page has good information right now but perhaps could use more. The paragraphs are only a couple of sentences. I would expand more, especially on the history. I didn't find any grammar mistakes. I also think the information fit Wikipedia criteria and sounded very scholarly. Jovi KB (talk) 17:40, 14 November 2017 (UTC)