Talk:Accessory nerve/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kostas20142 (talk · contribs) 18:17, 28 September 2017 (UTC)

review
Hello, I am Kostas20142. I am going to review this article. --Kostas20142 (talk) 18:17, 28 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking up this review, . I'll be away this coming weekend (including Monday) but will get back to your comments within a week. Looking forward to your commentary, --Tom (LT) (talk) 21:52, 28 September 2017 (UTC)
 * @ done. --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:21, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

comments

 * I found a "citation needed" template in structure section, paragraph 1. Could someone fix it and then remove the template?
 * ✅ --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:21, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
 * In variation section, 1st par., the citation supports the whole paragraph and not just the number of necks examined, so it should be positioned at it's end, after full stop.
 * ✅ improved the citations and wording of that section --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:21, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Proposed modification (bold text is used only to identify the exact text): "Surgical management includes neurolysis, nerve end to end suturing, and surgical replacement of affected trapezius muscle segments with other muscle groups." → Surgical management includes neurolysis, nerve end-to-end suturing, and surgical replacement of affected trapezius muscle segments with other muscle groups. This is how I also found it in relevant articles and I believe it is the correct version.
 * ✅ --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:21, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Several sundry edits, including improvement of captions and removing of an unhelpful lead image, also performed. --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:21, 4 October 2017 (UTC)