Talk:Achilleas Kallakis

grammar trouble among the false claims
The article currently contains this putative sentence:
 * He falsely claimed to be an "ambassador for the Republic of San Marino", the author of Maritime Registries of the World and The Wonders of Italy, and to serve on a committee of the National Portrait Gallery in London.

It contains two occurrences of the conjunction "and", which is quite a few. But it actually needs a third.
 * One joins two verbs: "He claimed to be [. . .] and to serve [. . .]".
 * One joins the two objects of the preposition "of": "the author of "Maritime Registries" and "The Wonders of Italy".
 * One (currently missing) joins two predicate nominatives: "claimed to be an ambassador and the author".

I supplied the missing one, but it was removed. I'll put it back with a link to this discussion. If you aren't clear on why it's needed, let's talk about it here. TypoBoy (talk) 23:06, 20 November 2017 (UTC)