Talk:Ackley Bridge/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Content on the infobox looks good.
 * However, I would improve the non-free rationale for the image with this template.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Channel 4 from 7 June 2017" "Channel 4 on 7 June 2017"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Wait, so are the names of the school and the town the same?
 * Yes. I removed the comment about the town in the lead, since the setting of the series is not majorly important to the theme of the show (the school is).


 * Link "first series" to Ackley Bridge (series 1).
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * Mark the second reference after "The Forge" as dead since it's dead.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark the reference after "renamed Ackley Bridge" as dead.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark the reference after "7 June to 12 July 2017" as dead.
 * Replaced ref. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Additionally, that reference after "7 June to 12 July 2017" doesn't mention any dates.
 * ✅ Replaced with two separate references since there is no single ref that includes both dates. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * When I said to mark the two citations as dead, I meant that you should add the "|url-status=dead" parameter, not the [dead link] tag.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Casting

 * Mark the reference after "real life" as dead by adding "|url-status=dead" to the citation.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * A reference is needed for Amy-Leigh Hickman being "known for playing Carmen Howle in Tracy Beaker Returns and The Dumping Ground"
 * Removed as not relevant to this series and can be found on the actress' article. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "playing Eve in Eve" "playing the title character in Eve"
 * Sentence removed. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * A reference is also needed for Poppy Lee Friar playing the title character in Eve.
 * Removed as not relevant to this series and can be found on the actress' article. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Esa Ashraf is not mentioned in this archive used after "two other children".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark the reference after "control at home" as dead.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * A reference is needed for Paul Nicholls portraying Steve Bell.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "of Ackley Bridge College".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * What's the purpose of using the quote starting with "organised and driven" in this article?
 * Removed. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Actually, there are several quotes in the 2nd paragraph that are not needed so try removing some.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "The Crossley Heath School".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The character names and traits of Aaron Turner and Javid Shah are not mentioned in this source.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "guest starred" "guest-starred"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark the reference after "Claire Butterworth, respectively" as dead".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:23, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Vicky Entwistle and Kimberley Walsh, along with their roles as Sandra Turner and Claire Butterworth, are not mentioned here.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:45, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Phoebe Tuffs-Berry, Zara Salim, Hareet Deol, and Ty Glaser don't appear here or here.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:45, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Hareet Deol" and "Natalie Gavin".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:45, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Antonio Aakeel and James Atherton also don't appear here or here.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:45, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * In the last paragraph, does every character need a description? Maybe try simplifying the paragraph and merging it with the fourth one.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:45, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "The castings come" "The castings came"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:45, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Link Digital Spy.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:45, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Why is the last sentence from the Metro review just a summary of the show?
 * Removed. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:57, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The second review is from The Daily Telegraph, not The Guardian, so I would correct the name and the citation.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:57, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Similarly, the first review in the second paragraph is from The Guardian, not the Telegraph as the citation says.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:57, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Also, that same paragraph looks messy since it's basically just one quote. Try reducing it with the help of WP:RECEPTION.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:57, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The reference after "placed in care" is from Digital Spy, not Metro.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:57, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Awards and nominations

 * This reference doesn't mention George Ormond.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The source for the 2018 Irish Film & Television Academy Awards doesn't mention Ackley Bridge, Malcolm Campbell, or Robert Quinn.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Malcom Campbell" "Malcolm Campbell"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't the "Music" category from the Royal Television Society Yorkshire be mentioned last?
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * From that same ceremony, there are also multiple nominations not listed.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The name of the show and its single nomination at the 2019 TV Choice Awards is not mentioned here.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * So are the categories listed in alphabetical order per year, or is there something I'm not seeing here?
 * There is no particular order at the moment, but when I fully go through the table, I will order the categories per award show alphabetically. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 01:10, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The Asian Media Awards for Best Entertainment Show is does not appear in this source.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Ackley Bridge does not appear in this list for the 2020 TV Choice Award nomination for Best Drama Series.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * For the last ceremony, several nominations are not listed here.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 02:01, 5 March 2021 (UTC)