Talk:Action of 9 September 1796/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 11:10, 14 July 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Decent work there like normal, but I have a few comments.
 * Thanks for this review. I have some questions. Also, has this passed? The last line seems to suggest you passed it.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:48, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Fix dashes using the script
 * What script?--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:48, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * CharInsert. It is on by default. You can turn it on in your preferences
 * It is unecessary to cites like this The M4 Sherman served in WWII. It later served in the Korean War.
 * I think I've only done this when there is only one ref in the paragraph, in which case I've spaced them out to make it clear the whole paragraph is sourced.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:48, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * *Space between the "p" and number in the cites
 * Is this really necessary? I thought it was up to editor preference?--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:48, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * DAB link to broadside — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk • contribs) 11:11, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
 * DAB link to broadside — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk • contribs) 11:11, 14 July 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * You only need one kind of identifier for the references, not two.
 * I don't know what this means.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:48, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * It means that you don't need both oclcs and isbns for your refs.
 * Please and oclcs or isbns for two of the sources
 * I don't know what an OCLC is or where to find it. The two references without ISBNS were published before ISBNS were invented.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:48, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * OCLC numbers are found on www.worldcat.org. There are used for identifing refs that were mad before isbns were invented.
 * OCLC numbers are found on www.worldcat.org. There are used for identifing refs that were mad before isbns were invented.


 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Passing, well done (I have finished two issues on my own).--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:11, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Passing, well done (I have finished two issues on my own).--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:11, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing, well done (I have finished two issues on my own).--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:11, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing, well done (I have finished two issues on my own).--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:11, 17 July 2015 (UTC)