Talk:Active-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

I will finish this within two hours. JAG UAR   18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * I'd mention in the infobox image caption that the Active is in dazzle camouflage. Looked too snazzy for Royal Navy standards...
 * "The Active-class cruiser was a trio of scout cruisers" - needs plural
 * "As scout cruisers, the ships were only lightly protected to maximize their speed" - maximise
 * "thick on the slope and .5 inches (13 mm)" - is the full stop meant to be there?
 * "(the 3rd and and 1st Destroyer Flotillas (DF)" - duplication
 * No dead links
 * No dab links

Founds some minor prose errors, but once they're all done this should be good to go. JAG UAR   21:19, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
 * All done with these ships, but others to come if you've gotten bored!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:25, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, this is good to go now. Looking forward to it! Keep them coming in, and I'll keep reviewing them.  JAG  UAR   12:45, 15 April 2016 (UTC)