Talk:Adeline Leitzbach

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Hi, I read your article as part of the peer review. I think it's a pretty good article. Although you do a good summary of her career, if you could go into a little more detail (if there are details available, but I assume you must have looked), for example, by discussing some of the reception of her work - or more generally by giving one or two line for more of the different films on which she contributed - it would benefit greatly to the overall article. Also, you might want to do internal links more, there aren't a lot of those in your piece, and I wonder if some of the people she contributed with do not have their page now ? I'd make the filmography into a sortable table, it's easy and it'll make it nice to read. Finally, I think you need a source for her death, like an obituary ? Anyway, I hope I've been a little helpful and good luck !

Ef674 (talk) 16:28, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

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