Talk:Adem Jashari/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:16, 26 September 2013 (UTC)

This doesn't make sense to me either, so I've removed it and added that he participated in an anti-Serb uprising in '91. He appears to have been a farmer. I've added this to the article. Fixed. As mentioned above, I added how he participated in rebellion against Serb rule in 1991. I hope I've addressed all your comments. Regards, 23 editor (talk) 20:31, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links good.
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * Beginning in 1991, Adem Jashari frequently crossed the Yugoslav–Albanian border in order to participate in armed attacks against the Serbian police How is this possible if he lived in Kosovo?
 * What did he do for a living?
 * After you use the full name once, it's policy to just use the last name.
 * Can you say more about his actual guerrilla activities?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:16, 26 September 2013 (UTC)