Talk:Adentro/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Robin (talk · contribs) 12:38, 19 March 2013 (UTC)


 * I'll review this nomination. &mdash; Robin   (talk)  12:38, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll be taking care of this. —  Diva    Knockouts   20:24, 21 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Refs
 * ref 3 AllMusic is written with a capital m, and add its publisher, Rovi Corporation.
 * ref 5 link El Universal (Mexico City)
 * ref 5 link El Universal (Mexico City)


 * Lead
 * Delink Adentro tour as it doesn't have an article.


 * Recording
 * On an interview -- In which interview?
 * I re-titled this section because the sub-section wasn't needed (too small) and included more background information than compositional information.
 * These sentences - The song received negative response due to its theme, on which the singer commented that the song had "the most beautiful lyrics from Adentro,"[7][8] further stating that "more than hitting me, they [the criticism] saddens me."[8] He also stated that "criticism is a symptom of envy. - Lack clarity and seem to be translated from Spanish. I suggest removing it completely or re-structure the sentencing and move it to the critical reception section, where it belongs.
 * These sentences - The song received negative response due to its theme, on which the singer commented that the song had "the most beautiful lyrics from Adentro,"[7][8] further stating that "more than hitting me, they [the criticism] saddens me."[8] He also stated that "criticism is a symptom of envy. - Lack clarity and seem to be translated from Spanish. I suggest removing it completely or re-structure the sentencing and move it to the critical reception section, where it belongs.


 * Tour and Fundacion Adentro
 * The foundation, as stated, doesn't have anything to do with the album except for sharing the same name. Remove.
 * ❌, the foundation, as stated, is named after the album.
 * Okay, thanks! &mdash; Robin   (talk)  17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I think this section should be merged with the singles' section, to give the article more body.


 * Commercial performance
 * the album became Arjona's third album to do so -- do what?
 * ✅, I believe he was hinting at being certified in Argentina.


 * Critical reception
 * Too many quotes - try writing most of them in your own words.
 * Delink AllMusic as it is linked in the recording section.
 * Delink AllMusic as it is linked in the recording section.

On hold. &mdash; Robin   (talk)  13:55, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
 * All done! —  Diva    Knockouts   20:24, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I gave the article one last copy-edit. &mdash; Robin   (talk)  17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
 * By the way, this is very thoughtful of you, DivaKnockouts! &mdash; Robin   (talk)  17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. &mdash; Robin   (talk)  17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for that Robin! Regards. —  Diva    Knockouts   18:04, 22 March 2013 (UTC)