Talk:Adiós Nonino

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This page needs a rewrite - it's unclear and seems to have been written by someone who has little to no experience with the difference between Spanish and English encyclopaedia article formats - in particular when it comes to tenses and punctuation. For some reason Spanish speakers seem to avoid the past tense when writing English articles - instead of "In 1980 he visited New York" they tend to write "In 1980 he visits New York" (which is quite correct in Spanish, but sounds rather strange and unusual in English). There's also a rather alarming number of commas in the article and very poor pacing.

I have performed some minor edits, but it needs more love than what I have time for right now.

Akievsky (talk) 13:06, 14 August 2015 (UTC)