Talk:Admiral-class battlecruiser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 11:20, 28 May 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * There's something wrong with the reference to the Mackensens; do you mean the Ersatz Yorcks? The Mackensens had 35cm guns, not 38s.
 * That's what Brit Intelligence was reporting at the time; I've clarified it through a note.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good, but you might also want to mention that Germany was in fact building four Mackensens, not three. Parsecboy (talk) 11:26, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * One other thing: the external link doesn't seem to be working. Other than that everything looks pretty good. Just fix the bit about the Mackensens/Ersatz Yorcks and this article will be ready for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 11:36, 28 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed the link.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * One other thing: the external link doesn't seem to be working. Other than that everything looks pretty good. Just fix the bit about the Mackensens/Ersatz Yorcks and this article will be ready for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 11:36, 28 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed the link.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * One other thing: the external link doesn't seem to be working. Other than that everything looks pretty good. Just fix the bit about the Mackensens/Ersatz Yorcks and this article will be ready for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 11:36, 28 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed the link.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)