Talk:Admiral Clarey Bridge/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adam Cuerden (talk · contribs) 06:05, 22 February 2014 (UTC)

This article has all the content one could expect. The references appear good - there's a few issues with formatting, for example, WOLFGANG SAXON is a name, it shouldn't have been in all caps (I've fixed it now). There could be some other fixes to references, for example The Honolulu Advertiser could be linked, but these are relatively minor issues.

The biggest problem this has, however, is it's not very organized. There's little structure to the sections; for example, the section on the ferries - which predated the bridge - comes after the sections describing the bridge's planning and construction, which is an odd deviation from chronological order. The section "Namesake" should probably finish the article, that'd help keep focus.

On the whole, a very good start just needing a little rearrangement of material. Adam Cuerden (talk) 06:05, 22 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I reorganized it a bit, is that better?--v/r - TP 07:00, 22 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I made a couple tweaks - a couple things were subheadings, without a connection to the heading above them - and that'll do, I think. Pass. I've put it in Good articles/Engineering and technology - I didn't think Hawai'i quite fit into any of the subheadings - there's Western United States, but that generally refers to the west continental U.S. Adam Cuerden (talk) 19:50, 22 February 2014 (UTC)