Talk:Adrian Johns/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:22, 12 October 2013 (UTC)

I'll do this one. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 06:22, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Comments
 * lead should summarise major life events, not just his current role and immediate past one.
 * several awards are unreferenced
 * Guggenheim Fellow is categorised but not referenced✅
 * Checked the Guffenheim source, it was a different Adrian Johns. Removed. buffbills7701 20:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC)


 * no initial caps for ranks unless used in conjunction with his name✅(by Pm67)
 * I believe the appropriate honorific prefix includes his naval rank✅
 * Fixed. buffbills7701 20:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC)

Review completed, on hold for seven days for above comments to be addressed. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 06:42, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
 * This nomination will fail unless the above issues are addressed in the next 18 hours or so. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 13:50, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that. Never received a notice that it was on hold. buffbills7701 20:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Did one myself, just the lead and unreferenced awards to address. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 00:10, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
 * , I'm going to close this tomorrow my time as not listed on the basis of the inadequate lead (1b) and uncited medals (2b). Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 12:21, 21 October 2013 (UTC)