Talk:Adrian Parr

Trying to improve page
I am trying to improve upon the Wikipedia entry entitled "Adrian Parr." One of the points of contention for the article is the article's neutrality. How should I fix it? I am not even sure what the neutrality problem is with the article. Any help would be appreciated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by RashaAly (talk • contribs) 16:23, 8 October 2015 (UTC)

Also...
I am looking to revamp this entire page. I have new details to add to the entry. I have a lot more information. However, I want to know how I can make these changes without causing a lot of controversy about the changes. How do I do that? What are the guidelines? — Preceding unsigned comment added by RashaAly (talk • contribs) 16:24, 8 October 2015 (UTC)

-- Rasha Aly is the one who added the comment. Henceforth, my signature will be RA — Preceding unsigned comment added by RashaAly (talk • contribs) 16:57, 8 October 2015 (UTC)

-- I will be adding the changes to this entry today. I have been working on a rough drafts. If there are any questions, please let me know. RARashaAly (talk) 18:04, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
 * , I have no questions, just comments. I have rolled back your edits because they were promotional and removed all of the existing references. Wikipedia articles need to be neutrally written, and while the article as it currently stands could use some improvement on that front the version you created has way too many WEASEL words and FLOWERY language. The removal of the references is also an issue, since we require biographies of living persons to have reliable sources to verify all information.
 * You are welcome to make changes to this article, but I highly suggest doing it in small chunks that include good sourcing. Primefac (talk) 18:17, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

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