Talk:Adrift (1911 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:05, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

And time for another review.

Plot
 * "An official synopsis of the film was published in The Moving Picture World says" Change says to states.

Release and reception
 * "The Thanhouser advertisement in the Moving Picture News said" Link Moving Picture News here.
 * "One of the last advertisements for the film would be in September 1913." Suggest rewriting to: "One of the last advertisements for the film was shown in September 1913."
 * "A review in the The Moving Picture World was positive to the moral lesson" Unlink Moving Picture World as you have linked it in the production section.
 * "Walton of the The Moving Picture News" Do you know Walton's first name. Also unlink Moving Picture News since it should be linked earlier in the section.
 * Link The New York Dramatic Mirror.
 * Any known reason why the film is lost?

References
 * Link the publishers of these sources if possible.

Categories
 * Add this film to the lost films category.

Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 13:40, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
 * All set - I tweaked the September 1913 in a different way - so we don't say the advertisement was shown instead of the film. I do not know of any other advertised showings past that 1913 date. Everything is all set. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:19, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Every issue has been addressed, so I am promoting this to GA class. good888 (talk) 09:18, 4 February 2015 (UTC)