Talk:Adrift (Stargate Atlantis)/GA1

GA Review
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Nice work on the article! I will add my comments and questions below. I will put the article on hold for seven days so that you can fix this. Good luck! :)  The Le ft orium  16:08, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
 * What's hyperspace? (Maybe there's a Wikipedia article you can link to).
 * Hyperspace is a form of faster than light travel on most ships on the show, added link to Faster-than-light.
 * Internet should be spelled with a capital "i".
 * is forced to take command of the city Atlantis
 * Explain what M12-578 is.
 * Not sure if I should explain this in too much detail on the article, long story short, it is their new destination after fleeing their previous planet; in the Stargate universe, unnamed planets are often designated Pxx-xxx in SG-1, or Mxx-xxx in Atlantis.
 * Maybe you can the sentence to this: "preventing Atlantis from completing its jump to the planet M12-578"? The Le ft orium  16:54, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
 * That seems to work a bit better. -- Matthew R Dunn (talk) 17:03, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
 * In space suits Sheppard and Zelenka – Insert a comma after "space suits".
 * Weir, having apparently fully recovered regains consciousness. – comma after "recovered"
 * Spell out "wouldn't"
 * on all ten seasons of sister series – plural
 * decreased viewership by 6 six percent from the avaerage average ratings
 * unlink 2008
 * also nominated for the 6th sixth annual
 * Thanks for the review, I have addressed the concerns and even replied on the odd comment, let me know if there's more. -- Matthew R Dunn (talk) 16:52, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nice job! The article meets the criteria now so I will pass it. :)  The Le ft orium  17:07, 23 May 2009 (UTC)