Talk:Adrift in a Great City/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 16 January 2015 (UTC)

Going to take a look at this article once I finish reviewing a NASCAR article. good888 (talk) 18:12, 16 January 2015 (UTC)
 * OK. Just going to be working on a few other things in the mean time. Got a few other Thanhouser's after that if you are interested. The good news is that most of these have images to go with them. The Actor's Children has two unique images which Google took within minutes of uploading, but meh. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 20:02, 16 January 2015 (UTC)

Review is now complete. good888 (talk) 10:38, 17 January 2015 (UTC)

Lead section
 * "The film begins with Pat Moran who pays for passage of his wife and daughter" The passage you mean.
 * "Left by themselves, the daughter works in a sweatshop" Link sweatshop.

Production
 * "but a review in The New York Dramatic Mirror made the assumption that the scenes were shot in the morning." Link The New York Dramatic Mirror.

Release and reception
 * Link Missouri, The Morning Telegraph and Moving Picture World.
 * "The film is presumed lost." Any reason why?

References
 * Link the publishers of these sources if possible.

Categories
 * Add this film to the lost films category.

Going to place on hold for now. I will promote once the issues are addressed. good888 (talk) 10:38, 17 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixes done. There is no main reason for the Thanhouser film's to be lost, in fact they seem to have a much better than average survival rate. Of 1087 films more than 20% survive. I cannot link to the Silent Era website for the presumption of loss - but it is not a known surviving work. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 16:11, 17 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Just noticed that this is my 50th GA review. Anyway, since all the issues have been addressed, I will promote to GA class. good888 (talk) 16:19, 17 January 2015 (UTC)