Talk:Advanced Dungeons & Dragons (Community)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 18:02, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 18:02, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Lead

 * The phrase "games creator Dan Harmon" makes it sound like he made D&D - try rewording.
 * Is there a reason it can't be mentioned it was Chang (Ken Jeong) wearing blackface?

Plot

 * This section is 371 words (361 without actor names), so that passes WP:TVPLOT.
 * "feigns an interest" should be "feigns interest"

Production

 * "He also" "Harmon also" (to avoid confusion with previous sentence)
 * With the comment above, change the next sentence to "He credited".
 * Add a year date for Saving Private Ryan.
 * Same thing for The Fellowship of the Ring.

Reception

 * This section looks good.

Removal from streaming services

 * No issues here.