Talk:Adventure Time season 10/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Figfires (talk · contribs) 14:56, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

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Discussion

 * In the second paragraph in the cast section, there is an incident where 6 citations occur together. Could that possibly be changed to make the paragraph look better? It is simply too many citations for one sentence.
 * Same thing in the first section of the Broadcast and reception area. It would look better in my opinion to have "Sixth,(citation) seventh,(citation), etc.." than what is currently there. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Figfires Send me a message! 23:10, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look at this article. How do these changes look? I went ahead and implemented your suggestions.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  14:40, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks fine now. I will pass it once I get home. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Figfires Send me a message! 16:57, 5 December 2018 (UTC)