Talk:Adventure Time season 3/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 17:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi, I'll review this one. FunkMonk (talk) 17:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * "an implied past relationship between Marceline and Princess Bubblegum." It needs to be specified the relationship is lesbian in the intro. Relationship alone is ambiguous.
 * Added.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * "a dog with magical powers to change shape and grow and shrink at will" I see this formulation has been accepted in former reviews, but I think it sounds odd. It seems "the" should e added before "magical powers", or be followed by "that enable him to".
 * Fixed. You're right, it did seem funny.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I see it has also been previously accepted, but why does the whole cast of writers have to be mentioned in the intro?
 * I just added them in there to summarize the production section.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * As an animator myself, and because this is after all an animated show, I find it puzzling that the production section hardly even touches on this aspect. But I guess it is animated in Korea or some such?
 * I'll add a little blurb. It's mostly explained in the parent article, though.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Apart from these issues, which aren't exactly grave, looks good. FunkMonk (talk) 18:33, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * How does it look now?-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I think it all looks good now, so I'll pass. The only minor quibble left is that a footnote says Finn is 13, because he became so in a previous episode. That has no source, and though it might seem obvious, it should have one. FunkMonk (talk) 23:43, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: