Talk:Adventure Time season 7/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: DannyMusicEditor (talk · contribs) 14:52, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Will review over my Thanksgiving break.

Note: A little out of my comfort zone. I don't usually edit these type of articles.

Production

 * There is a place that says "though" rather than "through", I believe the latter is what you mean.
 * Good catch! Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)
 * Link storyboarding to storyboard, for those unfamiliar with the concept
 * A link has been added.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   14:56, 27 November 2017 (UTC)
 * You don't need to identify all the titles for those episodes that ended up in season 8. What I would like, however, is the number of episodes originally for season 7 that were excluded and added to the next season.
 * I've done both; in regards to the former, I added it to a note that is easily accessible, but also not out in the open, and in regards to the latter, I've added it right into the section.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   15:01, 27 November 2017 (UTC)
 * "Ristaino, Andy [skronked]." Please define "skronked".
 * That's his 'username' on Spring.me. A similar field is used when IDing Twitter posts.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   14:56, 27 November 2017 (UTC)

Section looks great. No complaints other than these few.

Will look at the next one later today.

Cast

 * 'Include' or 'included' in the first sentence? I honestly don't know the answer to this so let me know what you think.
 * I went with "included" since production has wrapped up.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   15:22, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Should there be a comma between 'elephant' and 'Tree Trunks'?
 * Good catch.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   15:22, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Is it 'the Fire Kingdom' or just 'Fire Kingdom'? I seem to remember it without 'the', but my memory may be faulty.
 * I think it can be both. Elsewhere I've just gone with "the fire Kingdom".-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   15:22, 8 December 2017 (UTC)

Broadcast/Reception

 * 'The second week-long string of episodes occurred ran' makes no sense.
 * I tried to clean this section up a bit.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   15:25, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
 * The reviews seem short - are you certain there's nothing you can add on the linked episodes, at least?
 * It is rather skimpy. I cover Stakes (which makes up about 1/4 of the season) and note that "Bad Jubies" and "Hall of Egress" were nominated for/won Emmys. Other than that, the critical reception has been kinda slim.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   15:25, 8 December 2017 (UTC)

The rest looks good at a first glance. I don't watch the show often anymore, so I don't know if anything should be changed in there.

Looks good!  danny music editor  Speak up! 04:16, 8 December 2017 (UTC)