Talk:Advertising to children

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sources not proving. check for more of those
i have found for example Sweden repeal 2010 but that was not a repeal and the source was a article that was not eaven about the repeal. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.216.52.3 (talk) 16:24, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

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I'm thinking of adding to this article using these sources. Any suggestions?

Rozendaal, E., Opree, S. J., & Buijzen, M. (2016). Development and Validation of a Survey Instrument to Measure Children's Advertising Literacy. Media Psychology, 19(1), 72-100. doi:10.1080/15213269.2014.885843

Karel, T., Lhotáková, M., & Olšanová, K. (2016). Regulate or Educate? Parental Perception of Food Advertising Targeting Children, its Regulation and Food Industry Self-Regulation in the Czech Republic. European Food & Feed Law Review, 11(2), 94-106.

Llovet Rodríguez, C., Díaz-Bustamante Ventisca, M., & Patiño Alves, B. (2016). THE SEXUALIZATION OF CHILDREN THROUGH ADVERTISING, FASHION BRANDS AND MEDIA. Revista Prisma Social, 156-189.

GRAD, I. (2015). Ethical Considerations on Advertising to Children. Postmodern Openings / Deschideri Postmoderne, 6(2), 43-57. doi:10.18662/po/2015.0602.04

Lapierre, M. A., Fleming-Milici, F., Rozendaal, E., McAlister, A. R., & Castonguay, J. (2017). The Effect of Advertising on Children and Adolescents. Pediatrics, 140S152-S156. doi:10.1542/peds.2016-1758V

Jmills27 (talk) 20:42, 23 February 2018 (UTC)

This article is poorly written and confusing. What is going on with the random capitalization (such as the word Children in several places)? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 100.16.59.30 (talk) 04:25, 14 December 2017 (UTC)

With regard to the "In Medicine" heading, I really have no idea what that second paragraph is talking about. 208.79.15.102 (talk) 10:37, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

I want to be acter Suvham mahto7542996783 (talk) 04:57, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

I want to make a film Suvham mahto7542996783 (talk) 04:58, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

I am 13 year old Suvham mahto7542996783 (talk) 04:59, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

Or I want to go in contest Suvham mahto7542996783 (talk) 04:59, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

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I needhelp=(your hrlelp request) Suvham mahto7542996783 (talk) 05:02, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

Emily Carew Wikipedia Article Evaluation

This article focuses on advertising that is directed at children. When first opening the article, the reader is alerted with a message that says the article itself needs help "cleaning up." This means that there are obvious mistakes throughout the actual article itself. The author first and foremost had trouble grammatically and was capitalizing when it was not necessary. The use of information was also very scattered and not cohesive. If the author had spread out the information and analyzed each fact there would have been a better flow to the article as a whole.

The citations used are almost all cited correctly. However, there were a few statistics used that may have been improperly cited. The author used a plethora of sources, especially a lot of research based university studies.EmilyCarew (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 19:34, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

This article is biased and poorly written.
This article is biased, and does not have the point of view of the advertisers and people opposing. It is probably written by one single person, as a prevalent style of writing can be found. Kinnounko (talk) 08:35, 14 March 2019 (UTC)

Made fixes
I removed a significant amount of content, most of which was unsourced and did not really pertain to the topic at hand. I think it now reads more like an encyclopedia article and not a personal research paper, but still needs some cleanup. Sk5893 (talk) 22:43, 25 July 2019 (UTC)

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