Talk:Aerial dance

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Awkward non-native English
I've just been editing § Overview. It's (it was) full of odd misuses, almost certainly by a non-native English speaker; e.g.,
 * The performance of the Company from others by the details of the choreography and the  [Italian "armonia"] of the movement
 * therefore it is necessary to memorize the
 * it is necessary to your partner or teacher
 * , there is no risk.

There are problems I don't have the knowledge to fix:
 * There are two types of aerial dance: Vertical dance is... The second is when...
 * What is the second type called?
 * An activity that mixes strength and beauty,... The practice of Acrobatic Tissue brings a lot of benefits to the practitioner:...
 * What is Acrobatic Tissue? I'm pretty sure it wouldn't be called "Tissue" in English. Is it the name of the second type?

As flagged on the page, the references are grossly inadequate. As not flagged but plainly visible all over the article, the ref content and form are generally not only inadequate but badly formatted in various ways, or not formatted at all.

--Thnidu (talk) 05:02, 27 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Acrobatic Tissue may be a reference to Aerial silk. I added a "see also" section with a link to the appropriate article and removed the list. ThinkHat (talk) 20:52, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

"Aerial arts" listed at Redirects for discussion
An editor has identified a potential problem with the redirect Aerial arts and has thus listed it for discussion. This discussion will occur at Redirects for discussion/Log/2022 September 23 until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion. eviolite  (talk)  15:07, 23 September 2022 (UTC)